Well.
More or less my thoughs when I was still 3 weeks in EQ, good start

Why do I picture this guy dressed like Travis Touchdown?
Oh well, on to the next chapters.

>Crowley has a new 'fic

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WALKED into Equestria? Wow, 1st time for everything.

"it’s either humans or humans, nothing else." ...and yet the fact that humans are the only ones it is POSSIBLE to date doesn't cross his mind? Interesting, tho, I'll have to keep reading...

Hmm, interesting. I'm not usually into HiE-type stories, but you've got a definite talent for dialogue. I always feel sick when people THINK they're writing in a southern dialect, but they're just sort of insulting it. You've got the touch, I gotta say.

I'm confused. I read it, liked it and starred it, yet it only has 7 comments? What the fuck?

Brilliantly written, Mah Boi!

This is really good. It's like you're writing for the pople who think of these things on their own but don't put it down on paper. Good job.

EPIC

It makes you think...
I mean, they are ponies with human personalities, they can speak and interact with other ponies just like humans do, so, is it wrong?

"She’s a pony. A horse. A beast. And since you’ve arrived, your best friend."

She's also sentient and not an animal, dumbass....I think I just insulted myself.

I just finished chapter 1. I've only read one clop fiction before, and that was "Simple." I'm definitely going to finish this.

Wow, very beautfully written!

Made by Crowely. Ergo, fantastic.

DAMN WELL WRITTEN keep it up man!!!!

If I was really there, I would always act wierd or shy. Oh yes, and I imagine myself in Marcus Fenix's armor from Gears of War 1 and 2.

287302 Mr. Hands

You know, the question of "Is it okay to have sex with a sentient non-biped" really is quite difficult to answer. This fic seems to be taking the side that I personally agree with (sentience trumps all other arguments), but the other side of the argument (you're having sex with something that not only isn't even your body type, but its anatomy is freakishly similar to that of a nonsentient pet species, and forget about children) has its merits as well.

Are you hiding something?
JK
It is good though.

OH SWEET JIZZ NUGGETS THIS IS GOOD!!

thanks for the birthday present ^^

wow sounds good so far oh and also love your work

I love these human-pony romance stories, and this one is well written, although as a Rarity fan I find it awkward to imagine myself from the narrator's pov. As for the ethics, I find nothing wrong considering the ponies are sentient, speaking beings capable of reciprocating love and granting consent.

this gives me a feel.

*reads first chapter*
im hooked

287149 One does not simply walk into Mor- Equestria!

288346 I wonder if there has been a "Mr. Hands in Equestria fic" made

288346 LOL

On to read more Crowley!

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lol, you know, for me if there is a talking, sentient being that can converse like a human and act with very human traits that i can relate to...I'm not sure if the physical form of a small quadrupedal pony would really stop me. XD After all their intentions are able to be made clear and aside from how they look I'm pretty sure as long as they weren't repulsive their mental capacity would help me deal with the inhuman form. Good thing that isn't Jack Harkness in this story or you could cut straight to Chapter 7 XD

297519 There has.

one does not simply, walk into Equestria (i'd post the meme but i have no idea how to imbed on the sight

284899 It's because he's awesome.

Apparently one DOES simply walk into Equestria.

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287149 One does not simply walk into Equestria.

I found a grammatical error, Crowley: "Y’know, Applejack, there something I still can’t get my head around."

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Fantastic story liked and favorited. keep up the good work

Sentient and consent what else do you need right? And I relate most to apple jack so I feel right at home in this fic xP anyway form matters little when two beings love one another

What’s the worst that could happen?”

Nothing. Absolutely nothing. Nothing has ever gone wrong when
that phrase is said!!!

So, maybe this is just me, but I'm a bit confused after reading this chapter. After all, I have no idea who this guy is or where he came from. all i know is that he might be from earth, (i guess,) and that he somehow walked into Equestria. Let's not even get started on the physics of crossing the entire galaxy on foot BY ACCIDENT assuming that's even what he did! this was a poor way to start the story because as of right now i have no context to explain why i should care about him. and if i don't have this context then how in the heck does apple jack have this context? what does she even see in him? i have no basis in which to condone or condemn this relationship either. How long has he been in Equestria? days, weeks, months? I don't know cause no one's even pointed this out.

I know this is the first chapter, and I'm sure, (rather, I hope,) that this gets explained later.

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It's supposed to be vague on purpose. How did he get there? Doesn't matter, he's there. Make your own idea of how he got there. Dimentional rip? Willed himself there through the power of thought? Plucked from one existence to another by universal accident? The story doesn't tell you because it's doesn't matter. He's there. That's that.

I'd like to think that Kamina and Chuck Norris got piss-drunk and in the ensuing fight, ripped a transdimensional portal open, and this poor guy just got caught in the crossfire but that's just me. Anyway, very nice thus far. Will continue!

2314985 Beautiful...

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Let's not forget Morgan Freeman narrating it

Well... the only reason you can only have a relationship with a human is because their is no other option when it comes to beings able to process emotions, not because of law.

2731657 beastiality is illegal too. Though that covers why.