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Lawpony


Wazzup mah ponehz? Okay, that was lame. I've been here for a while, but I've been away longer. I enjoy writing, and I love to see people enjoy it to. Hope you'll stick around!

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Prequel to Twilight Gives Way to Dawn. So if you haven't read it, stop here and return upon doing so, or you'll be lost!

After waiting for so long to join up, Cobalt turns old enough to become a soldier. He's always wanted to be a soldier, to protect ponies, and especially the princesses. So why wasn't he told to protect the two princesses that night? And better yet, why did Princess Twilight Sparkle start calling herself Queen RedDawn? Why has he been ordered to kill Princess Mi Amore Cadenza? But most importantly, with all the shady business, why is he still following along?

This story will jump slightly to cover a good portion of the history from Twilight Gives Way to Dawn.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 18 )

I like this story...a lot. The military premise is cool and exciting (as always) and the dialogue between characters is a nice touch. I would suggest though, do some universe building in your story, describe more what is going on to better familiarize everypony to the setting. And not just the background information but just to what's happening at that exact moment. Overall, great job and best of luck, your sitting on genius! :pinkiesmile:

I'm so glad that this is up.

And it's no problem, Internet issues happen to everyone.

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Will work on that next time, thanks! :pinkiehappy:

I'm not a veteran writer in any way, so any advice will be taken! :rainbowwild:

3092244 Yeah, my dad bought a new router yesterday, and today we found out that it's actually the base internet and not the connection to it...UGH! :facehoof:

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Why, thank you old chap! :moustache:

Your humble tool is still functioning

(Insert immature sex joke here)

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aaaaand, there's the sex joke...that I KNEW would spawn from that statement...:pinkiesick: *mutters* I have the most mature readers...
"What would Celestia think about this?"
:trollestia:
"Oh come on! Not you too!"
But I am going to include sex later on...for of the 'plot' (badum tss)
So, it may be tagged with sex later on...thinking about it.

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...insert...

HA!
sorry 'bout that. That was dumb. Should I change it to humble weapon, so that thought won't be thought again? Also, the sex tag I mentioned in last comment, yay or neigh?

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Hmmmm.... I think it's fine, I just have a very dirty mind.

The sex tag isn't needed at the moment.

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Will do! And by do i mean...OH NOW YOU GAVE IT TO ME! :pinkiesick:

I just realized after re-reading the end of this chapter before I began the next chapter, that what Pineshield said at the end was extremely creepy.

I mean, look at this!

"And you are my beautiful wife. And together, we're going to live forever!"

It's like, Mad Father or something...what's he gonna do, make her into a doll? :pinkiecrazy:

(Nothing gross or disturbing happens to Joule because of Pineshield.)

Man! So, 28 weeks since I wrote this?! UGH! I hate it when I'm so extremely behind schedule. I do not plan on abandoning this or Exiled Magic, but right now I am extremely busy. If I can write soon I will try to continue this. I loved writing it but I just got really busy and then my computer wouldn't let me edit. Then it wouldn't load the login page...now I'm here! And I plan on getting back into it! Soon.......hopefully. If you are just now reading this chapter, this story is not dead!

Oh my gosh the chapter I rushed, the shameless Tobuscus fanboying and PewDiePie reference...wow. :pinkiesick:

PEOPLE WERE ACTUALLY READING THIS AND WERE INTERESTED AND I ENDED IT ON THAT! :facehoof:

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