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Captain-Brony


Just a guy who wants to write/read some stories about ponies

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Takes place shortly after her first appearance in season one. Big Macintosh takes Trixie in when she has no place else to go, now she has to learn how to love and tolerate if she ever wants the nice and warm life Big Macintosh has told her about. Making peace with the ponies she met last time seems to be a good place to start. Big MacintoshxTrixie

Big MacintoshxTrixie (or MacinTrix as I like to call it) isn't what I like to think as a crack pairing but more of an outside the box pairing. Anyways, the short description pretty much says it all and I hope you enjoy it. One thing to keep in mind though is I write for fun, and while constructive criticism is understood it doesn't really tell me whether or not you enjoyed the story.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 195 )

Wait... wasn't this already added?

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Well I am still trying to figure this site out, so it could be some mistake I already rectified. But I should be the only one posting this story

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Ok then... I know I've read this before, was this on Fanfiction.net?

3063089 Yeah I posted it here too because I felt like the site was a nice place for pony stories

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Ah, well I wasn't sure since I couldn't find it... scratch that I was an idiot while searching. Well then Capt, welcome to FimFic

3063158 Me too. I know I've been dragging my heels on that sequel but I also have a lot of other story ideas I'd like to see come to life:yay:

Are you some sort of deity? I was just thinking about how good a TrixieXBigMac pairing can be. Suddenly, this appears in the front page. I will read this, and I will most likely enjoy this.:ajsmug:

3063306 Really? That's awesome!:pinkiehappy:

3065046 To be honest I'm not sure. Refresh my memory?

3065663 Surely you couldn't have forgotten this:
Welllllll if it hadn't been for Apple Eyed Joe, I would have read more of this story a long time ago.

Where did you come from? Where did you go? Where did you come from Trixie's New Big Red Life?

heh, think trixie's response to getting hit with pincones was a justice league ref, nice :rainbowlaugh:

3066664 I was wonder if anyone was ever going to catch that joke:yay:

3066939 Figuring this site out:rainbowderp: but fine:pinkiesmile:

Ah'm more humble than you.

:rainbowlaugh: best reply ever.

So....what happened to that Pinkie Promise and how you should never break it because Pinkie will come and be sad at you? Rarity sure broke that pretty damn fast.

Cut fic but the ending was incredibly rushed. I mean she literally joins the circus doesn't even have a single act before she's spontaneously fired? They can't track down an elephant? I'd think they'd be pretty easy to find really. And with how fast everyone forgives her felt a bit awkward.

3135203Well the only thing I can think to say is...sorry:rainbowderp:

3147424 Bwa? No need to be sorry :twilightsheepish: Jus giving my feedback on how I think you can improve in future and suchs.:twilightsmile:

3147426 In ch 9 Rarity Pinkie Pie Promises not to tell anyone that Trixie has a crush on Mac yet later at the dance she just blurts out that Trixie likes Mac. In the show Pinkie Pie Promises are shown to be a big deal and if you break them it's a big problem, yet Rarity acts as though she never made it.

3155416You're right:derpyderp2: I should fix that:twilightoops:

3155406Well feedback is nice and everything but I write for fun:pinkiehappy: I understand constructive criticism helps an author grow:rainbowdetermined2: But what I would really like to hear is whether or not you enjoyed yourself with this story:raritystarry:

Haha, "Apple" Eye Joe, sounds very very similar to another song from Rednex.

3215842:trixieshiftleft:hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...you may be on to something...:eeyup:

Somehow I can picture the omake happening in the show if Gilda and Granny ever meet again! :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by totallynotaunicorn deleted Nov 13th, 2013
Comment posted by totallynotaunicorn deleted Nov 13th, 2013
Comment posted by totallynotaunicorn deleted Nov 13th, 2013

We demand a sequel! But this is a very good story. Such a nice take on a surprisingly nice pairing.

3536553 Thank you very much:pinkiehappy: And you'll be pleased to know I'm already working on the sequel:rainbowdetermined2:

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Well, that's great! For a second there I thought I'd have to do something horrible to your mailbox in order to motivate you, but I guess I won't have to! :3

Comment posted by HeatherIsBestPlayer deleted Feb 21st, 2014

3944313 did I say she wouldn't? :derpyderp1: What do you think her rivalry with Rainbow Dash is about?:rainbowdetermined2: She's still going to be a magician by putting on shows with RD where they try to out do each other. If that wasn't clear then I guess it was my fault:unsuresweetie:

I remember this from... fanfiction.net, I think. Overall pretty good... except chores really should come after breakfast.

A large part of me chuckles when Applejack's put in her place like that at the end. *Evil chuckle*

"She's a pony in need!!" snapped Big Macintosh. He stood up at his full height which even Trixie found a little intimidating. "She aint got no place else to go!! She might not be very good at farming but she's still putting her all in to the work and directions that ya give her!! She might not be good at it but she's still a hard worker!! So long as she's willin' to work she stays!! And that is final young lady!!"

Ah, Big Mac. Lay down the law! One thing that stands out for me is him noting she tried at least. I note that against the Ursa, Applejack didn't even do that much. :trixieshiftright:

Ah, Rarity. You started it when you vandalized Trixie's cart. As for Twilight, even I gotta admit Trixie went too far with how she acted to her during her show.

Rarity was too harsh. She literally started the whole fiasco with her 'My my, what boasting' horse apples. Big Mac was pretty harsh for not listening to her side of the story, either. There's such a thing as too much humility, because then it leads to humiliation.

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