Did you ever wonder why Rainbow Dash had a rainbow mane and nobody else did?
Maybe it never crossed your mind that a rainbow is more than a superficial trait.
A little while after Rainbow fails her Wonderbolt audition, her friends begin to notice that her iconic rainbow mane and cyan coat are literally leaking color, leaving behind a shallow, lifeless shell of what Rainbow Dash used to be.
Without the old Rainbow Dash, everything seems to be thrown out of balance in Equestria, and the elements of harmony can't function. Together, they attempt to bring back color to the one they care for he most.
Through medical study and the magic of friendship, Equestria will finally understand Rainbow Pegasus ponies, and the existence of rainbows entirely.
Great story
You shouldn't capitalize these words. Why did you capitalize these words?
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I'll fix those typos
Just derps
hi i grabbed a copy of this for a review
if your would like to see my what I have to think heres a link
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Slash-wing-my-little-pony-FIM/339895572794546?ref=hl
Keep updating that prolouge hooked me
Alright my dear sir. Here is what is going to happen.You will write the next chapter and post it in the next 5 minutes. You will then write and post each subsequent chapter every 10 minutes. This is so that I may read this story without any significant holdup. This will then be sufficient enough payment for the grief you have caused me for having to read through that horrible beginning.
Would you like to know why it was horrible?
It was simply the worst feeling in the world knowing that I will have to wait for the next installment of words to load onto my screen. You are an illegitimate bastard that was gifted the golden pen of crap, to leave an audience hanging on such terribly amazing emotional words.
Also, I will now take a walk, calmly scream my lungs out, and then proceed to blow up, incinerate, and split the nucleus of every particle of matter that belongs to the people that down vote this story.
Thank you for your time,
-Tom the bomb
I'm liking this story. I'll be keeping an eye out for more; keep up the good work
*reads awesome story*
"Golly gee, what a story!"
*7 downvotes*
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am i gonna have to choke a bitch
3075945 I shall help you~mineturtle.
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oh please please please please finish the other chapters soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Boy, that escalated quickly
Cool story you should make more.
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This does have a lot of potential! I'll keep an eye out for this, can't wait for the next one.
MOAR!! NOW!!
From me to the wonder dummys: 2683(4!:)#&=$=%%}]<{`£{(9@)2
This has an truck-load of potential to it. Please don't screw that up. I can't name how many times a story started out so good just to be crushed by an unorganized, rushed, and lazy ending. So please, Keep up the good work!
I really like this so far.
Update, pleas
Wow, so destructive. Really good, can't wait for more!
will this be updated? i sure hope so, i would hate to find out that this is dead
4067447 Welp...
6198940 im sure we all know the answer now
next one?
How does one make such a good start to a story and then just not finish it? I was so excited when I read the description. It sounded so interesting. Then it was incomplete. The concept sounds pretty cool if you ask me.