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Dear Pinkie Pie,
Come to visit.
Pinkie got a letter from her family telling her to visit. But there's only one problem...
After what happened, her family shouldn't be writing letters to her.
~~~~~
Added the AU tag after reflection on how I plan for things to happen.
A like-dislike ratio of 30! Awesome! Certainly the best I've had a story do on Fimfiction, and I'm happy.
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First... Imma go ahead and favorite for later
3538579
Hope you enjoy it!
Hmm... Looks promising. I like it.
3538627
Hoping to make a substantial suspense fic, and have hints of mystery.
3538632 Nice.
I-I have no idea what the hell has happened so far... MY KIND OF STORY!!!!
~ Michael
3538640
Wait for Pinkie's dramatic reveal! Yes.
3538651 I'm curious on what that you have in store... but I'm not sure how good it's going to be.
~ Michael
i got a question why dose it say that the first chapter was release 18th Aug 2013
Hm.................interesting premise.........................and I've repeatedly said premise is half the battle......
SCREW IT, I've favorited worse.
3538702
Because that's when I first wrote it. I just never submitted it. I wanted to finish Chapter two before submitting, but I just haven't got around to it.
3538719 ok
3538723
I'm gonna delete your comment. I just changed that part. I completely did not realize that. You can be to yourself in secrecy about your discoveries.
3538733 What did you change again... You expect to post a comment like that, and not have people asking?
~ Michael
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No one will ever know.
This is an AWSOME FANFIC BRO! Cant wait for chapter 2 to see why Pinkies family shouldnt be able to send letters
You sir, have my attention.
Please continue.
Intriguing, Keep it up!
3682706
Thanks! Really hoping for a good dark mystery story!
3542438
2 chapters to spoil the suspense?! Preposterous!
It's going to take more than two chapters to learn the truth.
I'm beginning to see the outlines of a classic ghost story. Please do continue your story; I'd like to see if I'm correct.
Ooh wow, this is cool, please continue!
I shall follow this story.
4284358
Dafuq did you just post on my story?
4284450
and a Shrek video, because Shrek is love and life.
It was a compliment.
...What.
4284358 What the actual fucking fuck dude.
Well, very nice to see this updated, but I gotta say... it's about time bro.
Signed,
--Pyro The Faithful Reader
4284606
I know that
I hope you got the poor joke.
4284521
I think I got the compliment part... which was not the part involving the Shrek. The part involving Shrek was so disjointed and not connected that I don't know what to feel anymore.
4284633
Shrek is love, shrek is life... one should always be grateful for the ogre's blessing.
4284601
I do not speak this language. Can you elaborate on this "...What.
4284636
I for one am not welcoming of the new orgelord.
I honestly find the whole Shrek thing pretty annoying.
4284660
Better check yoself before you shr--
Anyway I like your story.
4284677
Good to know you are acceptant of other people. Because isn't that what this site is all about? (Hint: It isn't)
4284694
I'm honestly not sure what you were trying to say there, but okay.
Can't I just like your story in my own retarded way?
4284702
Sure! When you're dead.
4284716
I've always been dead... inside.
*hair flip*
4284726
Honestly not the style of song I was expecting.
4284739
Better? This is more my thing anyway.
4284746
I was thinking more
But that works too. Creepy stuff.
And on the line of weird dissonant stuff:
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Weird things people write.
Well that was a doozy. I was leaning towards rape
, but attempted murder works too. 
4313490
Yeah, because rape is such a better plot device. (Sarcasm self-check complete)
4317888
If you say so Gladious
Wierder is good. I like weird.
It was great to see another chapter arrive. I think this is my favorite one so far.
4767037
Thanks! I wasn't sure what people were going to think, but it seems fine so far.
How is it the best? Is it the best in terms of plot advancement or exposition or what? Is it the best chapter overall so far?
If it's the best because of the writing (as in not plot or etc. related), could you tell me why so I can do it again?
So... The rest of the mane six are dead, and she suddenly thinks she's safe? I'm sure it's not going to be that simple.
She should never have gone back.
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Safety is never good in horror stories.