Everyone has had tragedy befallen them before. Some more painful than others. Rated Teen for alcohol references and death(not gore).
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this is pretty good! I loved the way it started out, and i will most definitely keep reading!
Due to the fact it has some......items i disagree with, i will not be favoriting it, but i will try to read more!!! 
keep goin
keep goin
this started off great, it should keep goin
Fantastic! Absolutely fantastic! I like the idea of Fluttershy liking Dash first... It just seems right to me and I'm glad you used it... Thanks for telling me about this, keep it going!
o.O
the mental plane eah
inventive
unless thats a real thing...
293439I'm sure its not real. At least i hope. :/
OOOH! Hurry up on chapter four >.<
348200 I'm working on it. I promise it will be up sometime this week.
YAY!
Sniffle sniffle sniffle, I love how tis is going, sad stuff and all, its TOO MUCH!
GAH THE SUSPENCE!
so they gonna pray
hmm
lets see where this goes :)
This should be called FADING RAINBOWS! It fits it more than my story, CHANGE THE NAME PLZ! Well if you don't mind.
366910 But that's your title. I don't want others thinking I ripped you off.
Update soon!
alright man
i have read all of the chapters
and for your question on where you should end
...?
well im biased to happy endings, so rainbow dash wakes up in time to fall for fluttershy
but if you feel a sad ending then have either dash wake up, but changed or never wake up
if i was writing this that would be the paths i would think about taking
hope this helps
HERE WE GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FUUUUCCCKKKK YYEEAAAAHHHHHH
Your Welcome bby <3