Rivet Turner is a maintenance pony living in Stable 12. One day while working he finds a strange message on a terminal and is thrust into the unforgiving wasteland of Equestria.
Great start. Especially with just one typo that I found.
“What do you want Rivet? I already gave you your precious time off, can’t I just work in piece?” DeadBolt said, annoyed. You got piece when you meant peace.
Great start. Especially with just one typo that I found.
“What do you want Rivet? I already gave you your precious time off, can’t I just work in piece?” DeadBolt said, annoyed.
You got piece when you meant peace.