Another good one

3831527 Did you even read it? It's been up for only five minutes...

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People read fast

3834520 Yeah, but I don't think people can gread 1k words per minute...

I was listening to the intro to this chapter during lunch. I had a goofy grin on my face the whole time.

Overall, this chapter seems a bit whimsical kinds of silly, and that amused me. Seems like the whole town might be pervs. Or not. Either way. Yay, new-ish town!

Feel almost like a rest chapter though, so whatever's immediately about to happen next is probably going to suck if the trends from Project Horizons, Heroes, and New Pegas hold consistant in sidefics. Not sure I've read a FoE sidefic where a rest chapter concluded peacefully and then went back into another arc of building up to the next conflict and resolution hump. Or. something. I dunno. I don't typically analyze things to that degree anyway.

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"Besides, you’ve not had a real rest since before we met."
This particular quote sounds weird when spoken aloud. Typically, I don't like to nitpick or criticize character quotes a lot, because often anything oddity in something spoken by a character can simply be attributed to the speaking character. But in this scenario in particular, I have to wonder if he was following/analyzing What'sherface before she actually met him, if he can read her mind or is viewing her memories to get a grasp of her prior experiences, or if he just has a funny way of speaking. Like, if I were in his scenario I'd say something more akin to "I've never seen you get a good rest since we met." In that scenario the quote limits the claim exclusively to what [the speaker] has A: witnessed B: Since meeting. Which would exclude witnessed sleep before meeting, or rest that had simply gone unnoticed.
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Yay, party hat!