I'm a general author, writing stories here and there.
In the midst of another world conference gone wrong, a strange portal appears up over an uninhabited island. When the boys all go to check out the strange phenomenon, they are inevitably sucked into the portal, and awaken in a world they have never seen before.
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Look, doing a fic about an anime ain't gonna work out. Lemme go into better detail, of a how certain types of fics usually do, and how they're usually made, in order of worst to best.
1.:Marine in Equestria
Marine in Equestria, or MiE, is terribly overdone. It's the same generic idea: Edgy one man soldier squad goes to Equestria, and then they use common bullshit where they use the guns, or PTSD as a main plot point. Chance of this type of fic being good? 0.1/10.
2.:Self-Inserts (Anime is next if you wanna skip to that)
There is a tiny smidge for this to work, and it requires a few things, depending a few other things. If it's Pony-only self created OC's, (CANNOT BE BLACK/RED OR AN ALICORN) make sure they fit in, and have a backstory, don't make your personality in them, it's repulsive. Try making your own. If it's human-only, you obviously don't understand how human fics work, because those never do. Chance of this type of fic working? 2/10
3.:Anime Fics
Anime is tricky, it depends all on what anime you choose. Choosing Naruto is the easiest way to be hated across the globe, for reasons I don't believe I'll need to specify. Choosing a anime with some sort of OP protagonist is just boring, it's essentialy a watered-down MiE fic, but with a more likable and recognizable character. Chance of this type of fic working? I'd guess it's a 50/50 chance.
Hetalia is just one of those anime's with no action (from what I know) and no real point. It is just X goes to Y and completes X with (insert character here) then you insert some kind of conflict before the readers leave.
Just bear in mind, this is what I know, which is little to nothing.
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I actually planned out the whole story ahead of time, and it's supposed to be a comedy fic. So yeah... Hetalia isn't an action anime, where you're right. It's a funny comedy anime (Not lying or anything) with 5 minute episodes and one full length film titled ": Paint it, White!" which is also funny in itself. I'm not trying to make a wild attempt to try and get a frikken good rated story, I'm just trying to make one that is decent enough and makes people laugh. I completely understand what you're saying here, and your word should be spread along all across FIMfiction, just don't mind my fic at all, you know? You're right about everything, there are those fics where they do some last ditch attempt to right all wrongs, and I'm not going for that like I did in my last story, which had extremely poor formatting and storytelling, but it had a plot at the least. (Fuck! Derails! Shit!)
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There is hetalia Paint it White movie
with fight scene
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Ohhh... Don't worry, about it, I just told him my viewpoint of it all. In fact, I'm not exactly trying to make this top grade A+ thousands of likes material. Just a decent story for laughs.
3507873 I was actually dreading your response, prepared to deal with a inept child, so color me surprised when you turned out sensible. (Yes, even with proper grammar and spelling, a child can be hidden anywhere...
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Thank you for reading my slightly harsh, but still kind-sort-of true criticism.
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Dude, you're absolutely right!
I'll read this later, and I expect a heavy dose of Russia when I do.
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There'll be an upcoming Russia Chapter soon... (huehuehue)
wow suchponiesverysmartmuchcountries.3775924
WTF!?!
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Well, glad I could be of service, then! :D
Suddenly, Discord...
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I should definitely put him in the story. I completely didn't even think of that!
Will this be continued?
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Yep, it sure will be
This is really good so far c: I love how in character they all are. Awesome job! ^u^
That short? Well Filler that all. Nice.
Please update soon.
3776224 Shhh, reeducation is a very delicate procedure.
Lel, typical countries arguing XD
so america is pinkie-esque
Typical Feli
How does an owl with wings instead of hands facepalm? Does it face-feather instead?
"get your panties up in a wedge"
Its so uncomfortable when that happens am i right
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I bet Discord was the one who made the portal in the first place!
Ooooh crap pleas don't start a WWIII.
I agree