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Kaldanor


Hi, I write pony stuff as a hobby. As such, the amount of time I put into it varies. Feel free to ask me questions or send messages but I'm bad at responding in a timely manner.

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Everypony knows that Pinkie loves to befriend all the ponies in Ponyville. She just loves to make them smile, and be friendly as could be. What happens, though, when a new pegasus comes to town and Pinkie's best efforts go awry due to a simple misunderstanding? Can she recover this potential friendship? What lengths will she go to in order to make up for her mistakes and try to make the new mare smile?

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Comments ( 154 )

This one hasn't changed a lot, in this story I really liked the first chapter, but didn't like how a few later scenes progressed. It was kind of an additive effect and kept getting worse as time progressed. So the first few chapters haven't changed a whole lot, just they're way longer and written better.

Ooh, I missed this while it wasn't updating. Yay!

Humm very interesting........ I shall continue reading it when it updates. Till then good day Sir or Madam.

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Next chapter should be done with editing later today, actually. It's sir by the way :pinkiehappy:

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As the description says, it's a rewrite. I deleted the old chapters without realizing it would remove the views too, but it still has all the likes and favorites so it got featured.

Oh yeah, by the way I never heard back from my editor on this one. This chapter is in a decent state without hearing from him, and I don't want these rewritten chapters to come out too slowly, so I went ahead and published it. If you find anything glaring, just let me know.

Once again you impress me with a very interesting chapter. Thank you sir for your the pleasent and charming addition to this fantastic story. Also, while reading no errors stuck out profusely.

Yeesh, talking like that almost seems like I am indirectly saying your story is good, so I shall say it how I usually would. Loving the story so far, and I am hoping you keep up with the good work!:pinkiehappy:

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You lavish me with such praise, and nothing has happened yet. Also indirect can be good too, being told all the reasons why something is good can be just as nice. The next chapter should be up in a few days, as the first few ones don't really need much in actual rewriting. Instead, they're just getting a makeover so to speak, cleaning up the writing, making them more interesting etc.

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Yea, being direct is a rather difficult thing for me to do, but I can try.

I like the concept of this story of pinky having to try harder to be friends with someone because she cannot speak.

I enjoy how well you represent Pinky Pie and how close to charater she seems to be.

You created a OC out of thin air and in only 2 chapters you make her a likable and interesting charater.

I like the subtle hints at romance formulating to where they are not in your face, but have a natural flow with the rest of the story.

You make it easy to form the story in my mind. Which I guess that means you discribe each situation with just enough detail to not go over board, but enough so the story does not seem empty.

The way you discribe Sliver Wings acting as a mute makes it believable that she is a mute.(If that makes sense:twilightblush:)

That is all I can think of at the moment. I hope thats direct enough for you.:pinkiehappy: Oh I couldn't really think of anything I do not like about this story. If you want me to I can make up a rant about some pointless thing that sorta has to do with this story, but wonders off to complaining about how music today is currupting todays youth.:pinkiehappy:

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:twilightsheepish:

This story originally started with the idea that I wanted to write for a mute pony as a writing exercise. As such, Silver never communicates in any way except with body language, and the occasional as you can see in this chapter, pantomiming. I didn't want to have her write, or use magic or any other such "cheats." It turned into shipping with Pinkie because frankly the idea amused me. The story just kind of happened from there, I probably shouldn't be revealing this, everyone is supposed to think writers are brilliant and put huge amounts of effort into our works... I didn't tell you any of this. :trixieshiftright:

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Wait you told me what now?:rainbowhuh:

It is an interesting concept to try and communicate with nothing but body language. I would try doing that for a day if it would not cause my dad to get mad at me thinking I just out of the blue desided to stop talking to him, but then again I do not really talk alot anyway.... I honestly think writing does not take alot of effort just alot of time. Its one of those things either you can write or you can not.:twilightblush:

Also I was close to the concept of the story that you were going for....:pinkiecrazy:

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Writing takes time and effort to be good at, some people are better than others to begin with, sure. Almost anyone who writes well has taken the time to practice and improve. That's why I still send chapters that I think are in a good state to editors, so I can get feedback and keep improving. Also, you should see how bad the first few stories I wrote were. Oy... :facehoof:

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Fair enough.....honestly I was being a little closed minded because I am horrible at putting my thoughts into words, so I guess I had myself in mind when I said what I did.:twilightblush: Sorry for being a little closed minded. I dislike it when others are that way so I try to make it so that I am not.

The only storys I have read of yours so far would be From Scratch and Solace in Silence, so thats all I know of what you have written. The quality of your storys from what I have read are great.

What sort of sorcery is this!?! How is this already on my read it later list?
I already have 170 (:pinkiegasp:) on it anyway, so let there be more!

Tracking for now. Will read sometime after Gilda shows up in the show again.

...actually, make that Trixie. I'm not sure the story writers give two bucks about Gilda anymore...

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This is the same story that was up before, but I"m a moron and deleted the chapters instead of unpublishing them. This means all the views are gone, but favorites, likes, and read laters are still there.

edit; I should clarify that it's because I'm rewriting the story, and under the new FIMF rules about rewrites they tell you to use the same story instead of making a new one.

I like it so far. And my D'awwwww-dar is sensing high amounts of D'awwww in upcoming chapters.

I have faith in you, do not disappoint me.

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Heh, I shall never tell! :duck:

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We have a secretive one here boys.:pinkiecrazy:

That's good, you shall be followed.

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But I don't even remember this story!
Wait, how could I remember?Stupid!:facehoof:
I've read like 200 great story's.:twilightblush:

Considering how sad I was that there was not more of this fic out yet, I would say that is it is REALLY good. So, to be blunt - moar. :pinkiehappy:
i.imgur.com/x06ua.png

And it turns out Silver Wings is really...............................*Drum roll*. Celestia in disguise. :pinkiehappy:

Ok, ok, maybe not, it sounded cool.

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From Scratch is going to update first, then it shouldn't be too much longer for the next chapter of this since it is a rewrite. Chapter 4 and 5 are when the actual rewriting is going to be more visible at the same time, so they won't be as quick as the first three were.

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:facehoof:

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I hate when I have to use patience... oh well. Gonna follow you so I don't forget!

Already I am loving this. Its not all that easy to make an effective character when they can't speak, especially in the written word. Yet you are succeeding wonderfully. Never read the original version of this fic so I am eager to see exactly how this all plays out.

Im really glad you are redoing this story. Not that there was anything wrong with it before.
:twilightblush:

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It could have been written better, and there are a few points that I thought were a little weak. Basically even though it was received well I wasn't really that happy with it. That's why it hadn't updated for a long time, my unhappiness with it prevented me from continuing it, even though it was rather close to the end.

So much D'awww, for some reason! Thinking on it, there really weren't a huge number of D'awww inducing scenes... so why was that the first thing that popped into my head for a comment?

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Heartwarming was a word that was used frequently in the comments the firs time around for this story. Maybe it's that causing the Daww factor?

I like where this is going.
It's also very well written.
Keep it up!

Very interesting ^^ I like this story a lot :yay:

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Thank you!

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I'm glad you like it :twilightsmile:

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Probably updating From Scratch next, but depending on how long it takes there may be another chapter of this.

SWEET GODDESS IT GOT UPDATED.

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:rainbowlaugh: I'm not sure if I should be concerned that you're this excited about it.

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You should only be concerned if you're planning on stopping this fic. (That would not end well for ANYPONY dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png )
Also, great chapter! I usually don't like OCs, but Silver is adorable, and a ship between her and Pinkie makes scary amounts of sense. I'm also really looking forward to what you put her cutiemark/job as, and why doesn't Equestria have equal oppurtinity laws, sheesh!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Pinkie_Pie.png

I am making a guess at her future job............ Working in the kitchen with pinkie. The reasons are

1. Pinkie can understand Silver.
2. This is a shipping.
3. A mute can work in a kitchen as long as its not a packed kitchen.
4. It keeps Pinkie and Silver together which helps with the shipping.

Or rainbow could jump in and give her the job as a weather pony and bypass the PR(pony resorses) department.

As for the Cutie Mark I haven't the slightest clue..... you could go with the easy way and give her a pair of silver wings.

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I shall never tell :duck:

that is... until we get there in the story.

That was a bit longer than usual. The original before rewriting was 4200 words or so, and this was also the first chapter that I wanted to rewrite some scenes in completely. In other news, things, plot, stuff!

Came for the pic(I DAWWWWWed), stayed for the story, left because of sleep. THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!!!!:pinkiesmile:

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Hah, glad you like it. Pictures of Pinkie looking... relatively calm are rather rare so that was my only choice for now.

Question: Since pegasi can use their wings like hands. Why doesn't Silver know sing language or some pony equivalent?

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Well I find the pic pretty suitable IMO :pinkiesad2:

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I decided when I started to write this story that I didn't want to have any gimmicks for her talking. I didn't want any crazy magic, signing, or writing and just wanted to have her communicate non-verbally. Originally it was a writing exercise to write for a mute pony, but it turned into shipping when I had the idea and I couldn't stop laughing. It proceeded keep evolving from there, but I still didn't want to have her communicate directly in any way besides motions and facial expressions.

This is so sad, it's beauitful. I love it! :twilightsmile::heart::heart::heart:

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