Rainbow Dash returns from a convention in Manehatten to find all her friends throwing her a party, except for her little filly friend Scootaloo. The three CMC have gone missing for a few days, and when Rainbow Dash finds them Scootaloo has the worlds biggest surprise for everyone.
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hmmm...I like
I regret to inform you that until you post the next chapter within the next week, you may be responsible for my insanity of impatience xD Amazing story! Can't wait to see more.
I like the concept behind this, but you should probably get an editor or a pre-reader. There are a several sentences which are kind of ambiguous and many instances of misused homonyms (there instead of their especially).
This is my first story I've published so I'm still working on stuff. Glad to see people like it so far.
First
peanut
...Shouldn't Dash be a LITTLE more upset that a filly beat her to the Wonderbolts?
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ehhh she is still in shock...she will have her typical mental breakdown later
Oooooh this is getting really good :D
I got to say I would love to see some of Rainbow's reaction to the news...becase I don't think that even she would take something like this.
I mean it would crush her and destory her both personally and her own friendship with
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Please do keep up teh good work upon such a grat storyline like this one as it seems that the flashback it getting good.
Great update, I cannot wait to see how Rainbow Dash take the news of learning the rest of Scootaloo's story.
Man, it must be eating her out badly to be beaten by her number one fan.
Please do keep putting up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.
Another wonderful chapter! can't wait for next ^_^
DANG, I knew Rainbow was takng the news a bit too hard.
I mean just WOW, at how Rainbow reacted to the rest of the story.
Now Scootaloo was outside her own door and just too close to where Rainbow Dash was.
I must say Rainbow is truly in a pickle of a problem.
All this and Tank the TORTISE makes his slow appearance.
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.
Can't wait for next chapter :d keep em commin
Cliffhangers, cliffhangers in every chapter!
Well done, I cant wait for the next chapter!
Interesting update, I mean it left me a bit speechless.
So Rainbow Dash has a dark past and its the real reason why she left Cloudsdale ?
Yet, why can't she remember it and when she does....will it affect her current relationship with those around her ?
Please do keep up the good work upon such an interesting tale like this one.
If anyone's wondering why I'm not saying anything about Rainbow's past. Its because I'm gonna right another story on that. Sorry, but your gonna have to wait :D.
Fantasic work, can't wait for next chapter and that next story about her past :D you got alot of work ahead of ya but I'm sure you can pull it off!
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Thanks for all the positive feedback on my story. And also, since Spring sports started last week things will come out slower as well. I'll still try for at least 1 chapter a week.
Aww a seperate story?
Still enjoyed this chapter.
If this second story of yours that connects to Rainbow Dash's past, will it invovled the filly version of....
?
Also whenever Rainbow Dash can even recall this "horrible" incident, how will it change her and the way she looks at herself and others ?
I mean will it lead her to runaway again ?
Even if it is from
?
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one as I cannot wait to see what happens next in this storyline of yours.
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Thanks for all the positive feedback!
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Ya I can easily write a lot (and I actually haven't thought up of a whole story yet either) on that, so I decided to make a separate story for it on its own.
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It makes sense. Best way to really tell her story is through specialized chapter(s) which might as well be their own story. I look forward to more of your excellent writing!
For anyone who isn't following me and wants to read Rainbow Dash's past story, 1) you should follow me and 2) I'll be called "The Butterfly Effect" So look out for that one. I can post a link to it in the description one I start it and finish this one, and the other story I'm working on, too.
Also I know this ones short, I really just wanted to get some out since its been way to long and I've just had super-duper-epic writers block for this story which just recently went away and I got an idea on the ending plotline. I guess on the bright side my other story already had a plot start to finish and for The Butterfly Effect, I'm gonna outline everything first and make it even awesomer than my first two.
GAH! I forgot there will be a side story for Dash's past until I finished this chapter! Renewed pain!
Well i'm still glad there was an update today
Is this going to be updated anytime soon? I'm really wanting to know what happens next!
MOAR!! Um... If that's not to much trouble...