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The Cosmic Warriors, a guild of Equestria of warriors from any race. Their halls are filled with stories of perilous battles and grand duels. Yet, every great guild has its beginnings. And its dark secrets.
Written using multiple peoples OCs. They are fine with me using them, as they have attempted to do a story like this before. Enjoy the reading and chaos.
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It doesn't bode well for your story when you say "it's" when you mean "its" and "there" when you mean "their" in the synopsis.
Do you want me to edit for grammar?
Am I in this? I would love for my character to come in on an uncooperative TARDIS.
Wonder if i'll appear in here somewhere... anyway as Axolu said aside from the need for grammar checks it looks good
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Fixed.
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I have plans.
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Same as I told pen.
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so you will be adding almost everyone in the CW?
just be quiet now...
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You are already in chapter 1 you know.
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she was actually looking for herself...and didn't notice that at all
Shut up doctor, please...
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I saw it now, and I have a question, did you forget about my powers and stuff that I have? Why am I just a normal filly?
I agree, I see a distinct lack of myself in this story, and also we wouldn't spend time with the CMC
Ya...
Also we know who CN and necrosphere are
Now your just complaining.
Whatever
Is it because it was before I got him?
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Yes.
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Oh, cool then...the CMC are going to be terrified when she starts having a seizure as she fights the doctor...or what looks like a seizure.
I did not fight you, I just had no other body
Keep saying that dude. Also I changed what I wanted my OC that has the doctor in her head's cutie mark to be. Its a quill mixed with an hourglass, for some reason a dog face on my flank unnerves me.
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Alright. You do realize who you just found, right?
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I don't understand the question
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Are you asking about finding the doctor?
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The two who just killed the wolves, Pen...
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the zebra and the other person? Yes I know them, forgot whose OC's and stuff they were but I know who they are.
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They are mine, Pen.
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Oh...I didn't know that...um...
I like it so far.
Now THIS will be interesting.
I can help you write anything for this by using the DA chat room, if you have a DA account that is.
(PM coming your way)
Time for the reading!
Will give my opinion in a bit!
EDIT: Not bad. It is the beginning though so it should start out the basics story and whatnot. Will keeping this an eye.
I like this chapter. Nice and moderately sized.
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Expect bigger as the plot expands... Ha. Plot.
I like this explanation of how Pen god the doctor in her head then my explanation...her mother died though, which is kind of sad and it wasn't told of the mother was a unicorn or not .
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Also, I am a major doctor who buff, if you need to understand anything about him I can tell you about him. He has two hearts, the ability to travel through all of time and space and has the knowledge of all that has ever happened, ever will be and never should be in his head. So basicallt all of time and space In his head, which is the reason I gave Pen Brush 3 hearts in the first place, because a normal human or pony cannot live with that inside them, so they have to have more then one heart to survive.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Doctor_(Doctor_Who)
http://tardis.wikia.com/wiki/The_Doctor
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Pen. A space marine, though not a normal human, has two hearts.
http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Creation_of_a_Space_Marine#.UheSfSLn_IU
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well...time lords have 2 hearts, since he has all of time and space in his head...so...time lord better then space marine because they are born with 2 hearts, as well as the ability to regenerate.
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Except when it is a fist fight.
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Time lords are a lot better at fighting then you think, they fought daleks. Time lords have 2 hearts when they are born, as well as the ability to regenerate. You need to watch the episodes they are cool and you will understand/
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Er... Pen, a Space Marine weighs more than a ton, without his armor. He is pure muscle and can deliver enough of a payload to break metal with his bare fist. And he has heightened reaction time as well as acid spittle.
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th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2011/347/3/e/tardis_wallpaper_by_spruffen-d4iz4bl.jpg TARDIS
MONSTERS
news.bbc.co.uk/media/images/52126000/jpg/_52126028_monster_bbc.jpg The silence (monster)
news.bbcimg.co.uk/media/images/49014000/jpg/_49014175_2.jpg cyberman
blogs.coventrytelegraph.net/thegeekfiles/Weeping%20Angel%203.jpg weeping angel (they kill you also)
bleedingcool.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/who-monsters-600x337.jpg (snowman controlled by a mind)
infodoctorwho.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/the-alliance.jpg (daleks santarens, others)
kirtiram.co.uk/doctorwho/_global/images/monsters.png (that is not a vampire by the way)
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that is terrifying. A time lord I guess would die and regenerate, then run away from them into their TARDIS. the TARDIS is actually huge on the inside doctorwhotv.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/InsideTardis2010.jpg
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Ooh, are we playing a game where we see who has the deadlier universe? Alright.
4.bp.blogspot.com/_aerGsj11rKw/TUmyai5UO6I/AAAAAAAAAH0/vvcr1ZS-QYU/s1600/tyranids_hold_the_line.jpg (tyranids om nom nom)
wh40k.lexicanum.com/mediawiki/images/thumb/8/85/NecronArt.jpg/250px-NecronArt.jpg (necrons; harvest humans and all flesh)
empiretauwarhammer.e.m.pic.centerblog.net/o/7d92f8ae.jpg (tau, the space commies)
1.bp.blogspot.com/_N8rQRcs-DzM/TLfPfG2J9ZI/AAAAAAAAAf4/bK8n2-FucsU/s1600/Dark_Eldar_Archon_and_Incubi_by_BazNevermore.jpg (Dark Eldar; the sadistic killers)
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no...you wanted to learn more about doctor who...I was telling you more about doctor who! His TARDIS is a police box, with a huge inside, not a pod. Also, he lives on earth because his own planet was time locked, meaning no one can come in or out of it for the rest of time and he saw earth as his adopted home planet with the humans he loves to protect. He loves saying alons-y Alonso! in his 10th regeneration and will do anything to protect his adopted family even to the point of genocide of an alien species as well as time locking his own planet to stop the attack of the daleks on his planet, resulting in him being the last time lord.
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Well, Artemis didn't get a good look inside the TARDIS when you jumped out of it.
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True...anyway TARDIS means Time and Relative Dimensions in Space, TARDIS meaning it travels through time and space. Anything else you would like to know about doctor who? He also has a sonic screwdriver that can open anything but wooden doors.
edit: as well as physic paper that can tell anybody what the doctor wants them to see, he can pretend to be the king of Belgium and show the paper and it would show them that he is. as an example. All he has to do is think what he wants them to know of him and show the paper.
doctorwhotoys.net/sonicscrewdriverwallet.jpg
Is my OC gonna be in this?
Also, story seems good, if a little too fast paced.
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Depends, I'll be dragging new people in every chapter. Though, the story will mainly revolve around TL, Me, Pen, and Chaotic. And that's mostly because three of us were the biggest involved in the group and Chaotic because he is always around Luna.
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you think im biggest involved?
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You were in every arena that I took place in, and those that I didn't.
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True...I guess I am a big part in it, but you have to admit, its fun as hell to RP as a half time lord. By the way did you see my last comment made a day ago?
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Yes, and?
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If you need to know anything else about doctor who, I will tell you if you need it
Nice. Especially how you use other's characters in your stories. Definitely liking that.
3053087 These comments are fun.
Bit confused to what is going on, and it sounds cool, and I love the Doctor, so anyone fill me in?
As far as I can tell, having the Doctor in one's head would be awesome.
Also, xnecro, awesome stories.
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the comment warriors is a group on this site. you make your own character. My character is a filly with the doctor in her head. He got permission to use the characters from the group
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Hello! I'm the Admin and original founder of the group depicted in this story.
The Comment Warriors as a group is currently.....well......dead. I hate to admit that, but it's true. The universe in question here is pretty much the same as in show, except it spreads across the galaxy.
It's honestly way more complicated than that though. I want to make a story myself, but I'm fine with staying on the sidelines here and reading this story instead.
Finally finished.
This
ChapterAdvent, while a tad quick, was amazing.I feel that TL is going to be a wise Know-It-All somehow. You nailed him perfectly by the way.
(The Knight seems to be blown up a lot. Good thing it's a Gummi Ship. XD)
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Good thing Advent 3 is so long. I'm taking a while.
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Just try to pace it and not throw a entire planet's worth of action into it, which I know is possible by your standards thank you very much.
The Star Sister's will be used in MY version of this universe BTW. When I get around to writing the story.......eventually.
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... Who do you think I am?