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Radiant Dawn

Write what you know; write what you feel. Give life to that which lacks it, and mend the heart of they who need it most. Love, laugh, and cry. Never be afraid to be yourself. This is me.


Everything that has a beginning has an end.

It is a lesson we all learn early in life, but some of us, more than others, experience that end sooner than we would wish. The end can put things into perspective, and make us see what is truly important in our lives...who is truly important. When the quantity of time is running out, we may find we must focus on the quality of the time remaining, as well as who that time is spent with.

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Beautifully sad story that left me speechless. :fluttercry: happy and sad tears mixed. Breathtaking.

Spilight truly is one of the greatness spike ships ever.

3042587 Personal experience compelled me to write.

Painfully Beautiful!:ajsleepy:

Now do a Spilight that does result in Spike dying in the future.:moustache::facehoof:

3042806 Already working on it.

:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!SO SAD!!!

What is this? A Sad rated story... That isn't pretentious? It isn't unintentionally hilarious? It isn't rushed as hell? No... This is a genuinely well executed Sad story...
Eveven though Twilight's confession and Spike's sudden dead were somewhat predictable and cliché, they both, as most of the story, were very well executed. But what makes this a true sad story is the fact that it doesn't treat the readers like idiots. In most of the Sad rated stories on this fandom that I've read, the author's seems to think we are idiots and we need to be reminded every two lines of dialogue that 'Something bad is happening'. And that the best way to remind us of this is making every single character in the story cry she/his brains out like he has nothing better to do... But I digress. :twilightsheepish:
My point is, with this story you did manage to deliver us some true heartwarming sad story. Well done.

Umm. I might be considered stupid for asking this, or offensive for doing so, but what makes a tumor/cancer inoperable? Um not trying to get off track from the story, but it's just a question that I know will bug me since reading this.
This story was perfectly excecuted, flawless, you made it sad but at the same time didn't over emphasis that yes this is sad. Presenting Twilight's struggle with this, her pain since it began, and her regrets/hope for when it was all over actually painted a pretty realistic view, add Spike's symptoms and the letter and you've got yourself a guaranteed tear jerker.

damn you, you bastard you made me cry :fluttercry:
good job :pinkiesad2:

3044134 I theorize that it's just that in this fanon, Equestria doesn't have the advanced medical equipment humans have.

As for the story, it made me very sad like another popular Spilight fic that ended sadly.

3044134 A tumor is considered inoperable when it's in a place surgery cannot safely extract without causing serious damage to the body. Generally speaking, any mass in the temporal lobe that isn't on the surface of the brain and isolated is considered inoperable.

Then is that caused by a lack of skill or is it impossible to get to it?

3045486 We don't have the technology to extract brain tumors safely yet.

Ehh!! That's it!? So you're telling me that the reason good people have to die from tumors and cancer victims have to die simply because they don't have the technology?!

3045584 Ummm Yes?
You really are surpised?
You have any idea how many people died back in the dark ages simply because nobody knew what is schizophrenia and/or autism?
Even now thousands of people die every day all around the world simply because they have no access to the medic services other countries possess.:ajsleepy:

Why? I was going to put something rather intelligent but I just can't. Are we really that bent out of shape that we would let people suffer simply because they don't have money?

Nope somehow I feel that it'll go off tangant. And I don't want to argue, or talk angry, I hate doing that. Still I argue that a persons skill can more than compensate for lack of technological advancement. I've seen it.

3045879 People died because they didn't know what schizophrenia is? Eh... I'd be a dead woman, haha.

Death........:raritydespair: such a sad end.......

3042636 yeah this story really sticks with me because i have a neurodgenerative disease, the doctors cant prove it and my parents dont know it, i reconigze the symptoms tho, still very early onset, for someone who shouldnt normally have this at my age, but really took how i feel and put it on paper, at least a little how i feel, very touching

:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry: Why do you wrote it?:moustache::heart::twilightsmile:


3278459 Because I'm an evil sonofadonkey who feeds on the tears and laughter of readers.

3318026 :fluttercry:

Very good. Really captured the moment
RIP Spike. :fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritycry: May the Valkyries ferry your soul to Valhalla.


Why you must hurt me this way....? :fluttercry:

3411601 Because I am an evil demon who feeds off of the tears of my readers...or I just enjoy making people feel the feels. Whichever you find more fun believing.:derpyderp2:

Gods damn, this was tragic, it's a shame even gods can't bargain with Death for souls, he would merely scoff in offense for not being able to do his job, odd how Celestia did not seem to care for her son as much as she should have, but maybe you never meant for her to be his mother in this story. The emotion and passion was real, Gods damn was it real, I almost cried before remembering who I was...a monster, shit, I'm following you, you deserve the followers you have gianed:yay:

3462990 Thank you. This was written from personal experience. I'm fairly positive I don't have to specify what part.

3465772 It's my honor and shit, no kidding, this could only be made by someone who went through it, I'm sorry you had to go through that:fluttercry:

Very well written. Bravo! :rainbowkiss: and ... :fluttershbad:

As quote done by the Demoman and my self "Bloody Brilliant" such a deep story love it but god dame the Feels:fluttershbad:raritycry::raritycry::fluttershbad::fluttercry::fluttercry:

This brought tears to my eyes. My family is wondering why im standing there crying my eyes out. And im in public...
Oh the feels that I am feeling are making me feel so much that I need to excuse myself to go cry some more

Beautiful. So beautiful and well thought out. I have to say that even though I don't like deaths and all, but I have to say that I loved how you wrote this. Yes, somemistakes were made, but were made up with how the ending came in. I'm crying and I don't cry easily. Basically, I'm trying to say that this was too amazing for words.

I enjoyed this story for all that its kinda tragic. I'm not sure what to make of that. Why is watching or reading someone experience trauma, and another die, an enjoyable story?

Murder or war I can understand, its like an action film. Romance the same as is adventure.

I wonder if it's the way twilight grows in this one. Or the way spike gave celestial a letter in trust for twilight.

It's a very strange feeling.

Personally, I believe, that as social creatures, we want to empathize with others. It's a natural response, so stories that make that easy tend to be some of our favorites.

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