• Member Since 16th Mar, 2012
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Ganondox


I'm a human who lives on the planet Earth.

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Princess Celestia has a very important task for Twilight in her friends that requires them to travel to Draylek and meet with Alfred, king of the Winglark. However, one thing the princess neglected to tell about there quest was how they were going to get there: in a cramped, smelly, old metal train car. At first it isn't so bad, but over time tensions raise and they begin to wonder if maybe Tartarus really is other ponies.

Rated T for Toilets.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

Despite what the description says it's actually rated M for Masturbation. Tell me if you think I can get away with just listing it as Teen, I'm keeping it at Mature for now to be safe. Anyway, it's not porn or anything, such content is mainly off-color humor and it's just a nasty little story I wrote to keep myself sane while crammed in camper van for a week with my five evil siblings (I'm evil too). Like usual it ended up being longer than I intended, so while I have pieces of the other chapters written only the first one is complete. You have been warned.

Hmmm i do like the Idea of the story as for the rating thing as long as you don't really describe the masturbation in detail i think it might pass.

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Well if you like the idea you might as well upvote it or favorite it :trollestia: Well the story has already been plunged into the downvote abyss, I figured such a thing might happen as varius elements make it alienate most audiences, it's not targeted at all. As I said it's a nasty little story I wrote to keep me sane. Changing it's rating won't make much of a difference now, but I might as well. Thanks for the answering the question, any sort of feedback is better than nothing at all.

Well keep this going! :pinkiehappy:

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Unfortunately I can't seem to goddamn finish a story and I have like 5 WIPs at the moment. Right now this isn't the highest priority, but doesn't mean I won't ever update it.

3056459 I do have over 600 words for Day 2 written, but I forgot how I planned on finishing that chapter, or what I was going to do afterwards. If you want I can show you what I do have though.

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