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GeodesicDragon


I am a Scotsman who writes stories, not all of which are of the self-insert variety. I also make mods for RimWorld and addons for World of Warcraft; more details can be found on my userpage.

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When Spike challenges Rainbow Dash to a race, the winner of which must do something for the loser, she gleefully accepts. To her dismay she loses — but rather than make her do something embarrassing like she was expecting him to, all Spike wants is for Dash to treat him to dinner.

As the night wears on, Spike drops a few hints about his true feelings — which Dash fails to pick up on. Can she realise the truth, or is it too late?

AUTHOR'S NOTES

Winner of this contest held by the SpikeDash group. Thanks, Vexy!

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Comments ( 60 )

yes! Spikedash is greatness! :moustache::rainbowdetermined2:

:heart: Loved it. SpikeDash is another favorite of my ships, next to FlutterSpike. Both though are more realistic in my opinion that RariSpike. It was cute of how Spike kept on dropping hint after hint. :twilightblush:

Short and lovely. Just like the ideal housewife. 11/10, would fap.

Not a fan of the ship, but it was nicely written.

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Of course you should, this is my story after all.

3041721 I know that but I'm sure I remember you form another fic of yours. :applejackunsure:

I'm not sure, but I have a nagging feeling I know you from something else.

Dedicated to Vexy, the biggest SpikeDash fan I know.

You flatter me, sir! :rainbowkiss:

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Sorry I'm a bit late to this scene. I've just been to a local Les Miserables musical, and then I've been packing my bag (long journey across the country tomorrow!)

3041422>>3041497 Can't agree more.

3041564 The short ones are most lovely.

It was well written, but Rainbow Dash seemed a bit OOC at times. Still, have a thumbs up.

This a nice little story and it's nice to see that girls can be just as clueless as some guys.

3041846 Yeah, I can't see her going home and actually thinking after Spike chickened out. :unsuresweetie: Or considering Spike awesome after he chickened out like that. I mean, that was seriously lame of him.

Not bad at all. This ship exists and is much-liked by Spike fans in spite of the fact that Rainbow Dash didn't even seem to realize she was meeting more than one person in the pilot. Her rudeness was equal to Spike's optimism, but this idea that Dash was just on a no-brakes ego trip at the moment (even though you never referred to that moment) would explain it all.

When did he get over Rarity? Also, how is he an adult dragon when they age slower than ponies? He would be an adult way after they die. I`m getting caught up in the facts. This should have the alternate universe tag. I like this story.

That was nice!:twilightsmile:
Well done!:moustache::rainbowdetermined2:

Simple, but beautiful. I like.:pinkiehappy:

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I think they age kinda like elves... They grow to a point normally and then their aging slows down.

I actually rather dislike Rainbow Dash fics for the most part, but I was pleasantly surprised with this one. Nice work!

Vexy I am greatly disappoint

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Not enough FlutterSpike fics :pinkiesad2:

3047359 Well, there is one writer on here that writes FlutterSpike fan fics. I got to look up her name right quick.:raritywink:

3047805 if you haven't heard of her, the name is Flutterfan457 :pinkiehappy:

I like this a lot even though I like dark stories I like this a lot.:moustache:

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._.

*raises one finger into the air and prepares to speak*

Never mind.

*goes back to FlutterSpike group.*

(Also, SpikeDash is best pairing :moustache::heart::rainbowkiss:)

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You have no idea how much I actually agree with that :rainbowlaugh:

This was quite a realistic ship story.:moustache:
Good show.:ajsmug:

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It was a noble effort, I'll give you that.

But I can beat it, with the minimal of effort, like so:

i.imgur.com/0aZ8cCR.jpg

I told you before that these comments are NOT your personal RPing ground, and you didn't listen. I think that justifies this decision, don't you?

And I have screenshots of all your comments, in case anyone thinks I blocked you for another reason.

Never read a Rainbow X Spike story. Gotta say, I like it.

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