Breakdown
AUTHORS NOTE: Sorry for the small chapter. I haven't been working on stories for weeks, and I have a HUGE test I've been studying for. REALLY sorry for the wait.
PART 1
Twilight was playing the Wii happily. I was sleeping on the couch. She was probably hoping she wouldn't wake me up because of her "loud reading". Twilight suddenly started to cry. I instantly woke up. "What's wrong, Twi?" I asked. "I heard glass break! I don't know what's going on!" I ran into the kitchen. There was a man standing right in front of me. "Are you Jack Leon?" he asked. "Y-Yes" I replied. "Come with me. We've got some questions for you. But first, grab your little pony." "Y-y-yessir..." I grabbed Twilight quickly. "What's going on?" she asked. "I don't know, we just need to go."
"Follow me." the man said. There was a helicopter parked in my BACKYARD. "Are you people crazy?! What do you think your doing, putting a helicopter in my backyard?!" I screamed at the man. He didn't reply, so I just kept on walking. The man opened the helicopter's door and let me in.
PART 2
I couldn't believe my eyes. We were at Dreamland. Area 51. I was surprised how I was the ONLY human to see this base so close up. "Keep following me" the man said. We walked into a little room with 8 seats, supposedly one for him, one for Twilight and one for me, but who was the other seats for? "Take a seat, but only one for both of you." I was confused. Who was going to sit in the other seats? Then they walked in. I couldn't believe my eyes. It was the rest of the Mane 6 and the Cutie Mark Crusaders. They were all very young, and the CMC were probably the size of two rulers put together. They were obviously only days old. Rarity held Sweetie Belle, Rainbow Dash held Scootaloo and Applejack held Apple Bloom. Then ANOTHER pony walked in. It was Braeburn Apple. "Well, howdy y'all!" yelled Braeburn. "Sit down please, Mister Apple." "Aw, y'don't need ta call me Mister! I might be the oldest outta all the other ponies, but ah still should just be called by mah name!" Braeburn said. Everyone sat down, the last seat left over for Braeburn, but he just laid on the floor against the wall. "Where did they all come from?" I asked. "Before I tell you that, I must introduce myself. I am Timothy Ormond. Now, will you explain, Braeburn?" asked Timothy.
"Well, all that ah remember, probably more then these fillies, is that ther' friend Twa'light casted a spell on all of us ponies, y'see, and it was supposed to increase our abilities in things we weren't good at, ah'nd next, we all shrunk down ta tiny little ponies, me only a few years, but them decades, y'hear?" explained Braeburn. "Thank you, Braeburn. Now, Jack, I trust you are familiar with all these ponies, after all, you are a brony, correct?" asked Timothy. "Yes, I am, but I haven't watched the show ever since I found Twilight." I said. "What show, da-" "Shh, Twilight. This doesn't concern you." Much I thought. "And where did you find this pony, Jack?" Timothy asked again.
I then explained where and how I'd found Twilight. "Okay, now, we have some quest---" The compound rumbled. "W-what was that, Bob?" asked Timothy through his radio. "WE DON'T KNOW, SIR! IT JUST KEEPS HITTING AGAINST US! IT'S GOT PARTS OF EAGLES, BULLS OR SOMETHIN, PONIES AND MORE!" yelled Bob through the radio. "Oh no. It's Discord!" I said. "Who's this Discord, Jack?!" Timothy sounded like he had just lost his family.
"He's got the parts of a whole bunch of animals, and he's the God Of Chaos in the show. He can turn the world into a joke-- or at least that's what he thinks--- and make everyone act... funny... very... very... funny..." I explained. "GYAH!!!" There were screams coming from the radio. "Bob?! BOB!? ARE YOU THERE?! BOB! RESPOND! Oh no. They must be dead." Timothy whammed the EMERGENCY button which was on the wall, smashing the glass covering it. His hands were covered in blood. "EVACUATE! COME ON, YOU ALL! WE HAVE TO GET OUT OF HERE!!!" But then everything just went black.
AUTHORS NOTE (AGAIN): Hoped you enjoyed the chapter! After my test (Which I've been studying for for like, 5 weeks) I will be writing more, and the test is on Friday, so by Tuesday chapter 6 SHOULD be up.
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lol wat?
It just got real. Right before it hit the fan.
rarity thinks this chapter was rushed could you mabey redo it but take your time sweety
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That was certainly a real twist in the story...
I think you put a cinderblock on the gas pedal there buddy, you might want to slow the story a bit and revise the chapter.
Well, everyone, the only reason I rushed it is because when everything went black Twilight was waking him up from his dream. That will be shown in the next chapter, cause Chapter 5 was a dream.
"Yay!!!!!!
" That was my reaction when I read the Email that said "My little Twilight" had been updated. I haven't read the new chapter yet, but thank you Zephyrdash for continuing this great story!
468379 Your welcome
I had to study a lot more today for my test, but it's only 2 days away. Thank god.
dude im loveing it u better keep writing or i will go discord on u
or turn u into cupcakes
me: *just scrollin', they hatin'*
this rolls up.
i see the picture
Me: B'AWWWWWWWWWWW.
*begin reading.*
That pic of little Twilight looks so adorable.
Well i didn´t really like this part of the story,
but the previous parts were awesome! 
Uhm. Dude. 7 weeks without a new part... And it's clear that this shit ain't done. Get crackin' and I'll feature you as a special mention on my reviews. Hop to it, mate. Oh, and it is still d'aww material. Just incomplete d'aww material.
Ejem.
Buck.
I AM VERY SORRY FOR THE DELAY EVERYONE. I've been working on many school projects and have lots of homework preparing for assessments. It is almost over. I also am out of town and away from my computer on the weekends, but I assure you all, the next chapter is coming VERY SOON, and will probably be here by Monday-Tuesday, but probably before. Again, sorry for the delay.
this story is awesome! (F*cked up) But awesome!
one minuite you found twilight, next, you're at area 51
awesome story but what happened to the chapter you promised
Everyone, I've got very good news, and some bad. I'll probably finish the chapter today, and I just got my summer vacation. BUT for a week I'll be out of town, away from my computer. I'm very sorry everyone, but the chapter SHOULD be finished today. I'll make an update in my next comment if I finish. Working on it now!
SHIT JUST GOT REAL
What was that about stuff just got real and it's fake
We'll that certainly escalated quickly