I have observed these creatures, these ponies of Equestria since before they were simple, dumb animals with nothing more than a desire to find good grass. I have seen their "problems." Really, they are just crybabies. The things you humans have gone through would make them cry just reading about it. I can't imagine what would happen if they had even a taste of what has happened to humanity.
Well actually I can.
Simple fact: I will be everywhere, at all times very soon.
Only until very soon, even now if you will, as their problems have increased slightly in severity as of late, but are in no way "tough to deal with." No, their problem will not be solved by waving around a few magical rocks with less power than my pinkie. My collections will become frequent, their wails will be followed by my arrival, War, sickness...anguish, pain , all the good tidbits that keep my poor self busy in many worlds.
Chaos is coming to Equestria, and so am I.
So the first and second times around Discord was just playing around, and only now has he gotten serious? And who is this "friend" of Celestia and Luna?
...well, what are you waiting for? MLP:FIM Season 3? Get that next chapter posted ASAP!
I'm not sure, but is your narrator supposed to Death? Are you doing a "The Book Thief" narration style? If so, that's awesome. If not, disregard this comment.
Also, remember that showing is always better than telling.
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Ah I was hoping someone else would catch that.
The Book Thief is my favorite book, and I think I know what you mean by "Showing is better than telling."
24656 First time Discord was serious, the second time around in Episodes 1-2, it seemed like he was playing an mean prank. So I did not take him seriously, I would like to think he was biding his time.
24656 hell yeah ohh and hes not dischord anymore hes chaos theyre a bit different dischord (THIS is wat the show says) is a lack of harmony between ponies chaos is a complete lack of all order so from now on he shall be called chaos when hes serious (because it more serious of a threat) and shall be called dischord when hes playing
24817 But in the show... He says "Looks like we're in for a bit of Chaos."
ok if i hadn't read the last chapter I'd have no idea whats going on and why is Celestia to me anyway out of character? she's acting really hostile to Rainbow Dash which Celestia would never do
26621 She is acting out of Character due to the gravity of the situation.
And if you didn't read the first chapter, yeah you would have no idea what is going on. That tends to be the trend in stories.