Dan & Pinkie VS.

by Morex25

Intermission

Dan & Pinkie VS
Intermission- Lazy Day

Today was a very lazy day.

There were no work, no parties, and no reason to get angry and get revenge, no nothing. Well, there was one thing; it was hot; which would usually turn any lazy day into a bad day for Dan.

Fortunately for Dan, he didn’t have to spend the day in his apartment which lacked a functional ceiling fan. No, today he was spending the day in Pinkie’s home under the breeze of her living room fan provided. Just chilling around, lying on the carpet floor. It was perfect.

Well, almost perfect. Lying next to him was Pinkie who was enjoying the breeze with him, a little too close for comfort. Dan would’ve complained but not today, today it was a day to be lazy.

“Hey, Dan? Can I ask you something?” said Pinkie breaking the silence in the house.

“You already did” he replied lazily and slightly annoyed. Why do people always ask that before asking what they wanted to ask? It would be faster if they just asked their dumb questions.

Next to him, Pinkie giggled thinking his replied was an attempt for a joke, “Dan, have you ever wondered about our life?” she asked in a manner that sent Dan’s mind into alert.

“What do you mean?” he replied tentatively. This better not be about something that would make him regret opening his trap in the first place.

“Have you ever wondered that maybe life isn’t what is seemed?” Oh boy! He was so not in the mood to talk about religion. “I mean, what if our lives are just a figment of the imagination of some random person?”

Now that threw him out the curve, “Not really,” he answered sincerely, “why do you ask?”

“It’s because these last chapters of our lives felt really weird.” Dan arched an eyebrow at her but he didn’t say anything and let her continue, “as if something that happened just got ret-coned or erased and I can’t figure out what or why.”

“Now that you mention it, I too have felt like that.” Of course he just assumed that it was life being its jerk self. That and the strange dreams he’s been having.

“I wish I could have an answer and put all this confusion to rest.” Pinkie said to the heavens above for an answer. In that exact second a flier came …flying…through the open window and smacked Pinkie in the face.

“Huh? What is it?” asked Dan, glad that the paper didn’t smack him instead.

“I don’t know! Let me read for a second."

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Author's Note:

MoreX: Uh? XeroM! Did you write this?
Xerom: No! Why would I write this. It doesn't even have a hot steamy make-out session in the end!
MoreX: So, if it wasn't you or me, Then who?

Comments

[The Grimm Thinker]

I feel that things are about to get crazy... well crazier.

[Moowell]

MoreX: Uh? XeroM! Did you write this?
Xerom: No! Why would I write this. It doesn't even have a hot steamy make-out session in the end!
MoreX: So, if it was you or me, (and it wasn't XeroM) Then who?

Logic implies MoreX.

[Telly Vision]

I just hope one day we return to the other universe.

[Morex25]

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Not really crazier. My character MoreX and XeroM will remain outside of the main story, only appearing on the comments or author notes, as an excuse to make jokes and say wierd stuff.
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Corrected it. It was suppoused to imply that MoreX isn't really Me (the author) though he believe he is.
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Oh, don't worry, XeroM already has plans for those other unverses.

[The Grimm Thinker]

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I was not talking about them, I was talking about with pinkie and dan

[Morex25]

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Oh that! Yep definetly back on board the crazy train! and now that I said that:

[Paton Pendeng]

Pat: Methinks... that the schizophrenzic schizophrenia has schizophrenia.

In other words-

Brian: oh my gosh! MoreX is a Nobody! Just like in KH! Take the X out and you get... uh... Remo, or... Rome, I dunno...

Pat: Jumped the gun on that one, didn't you Brain?

Brian: No... and thats not my name!

Pat: ... anyways, it's probably gonna be a third wheel to MoreX and XeroM.

[Mistershield]

Stories that entertain can be therapeutic and fun.
That being said, are you having fun?
Did you write yourself into an impasse, and not happy with results?
Why are elements of your story changing from focus to focus?
I read your blog, and yes, your time will come.

Soon.

Until then, get an editor. Talk to that person. They can help.
But decide what you want for your story.
Don't just please your fans. Listen to them, but don't cater to them.

Lastly...

I will destroy you and steal your fiancee, booty booty booty shaking everywhere...

[Morex25]

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That being said, are you having fun?
Did you write yourself into an impasse, and not happy with results?

Off course I'm having fun. And no, I haven't written myself into an impasse. There is still plenty of ideas here in this head.

Why are elements of your story changing from focus to focus?

I was just experimenting a little, trying to sound philosofical and stuff. The problem I think, was that I took the joke too far.
Most of what I wrote on the blog explaining was the truth. How I plan and write stuff. I may have embellished the part when I said that I was writing myself into a corner. Mostly it was all a set-up to have an excuse for me to get away with writing chapter 10.
You see I wanted to write that ( to play with people expectations ) but I didn't know where to put it. So I went with the whole 'my other self wrote that' thing.
So this whole thing was just me playing a joke and have an 'excuse' for me writing gags and scenes that would never make it into the story, but like I said, that went a little too far.
Don't worry Next chapter is back to basics and if my avatars 'MoreX and XeroM' are really that annoying I will just stop and let the joke die.

Until then, get an editor.

Yeah, yeah, I know my writing sucks... :P

I will destroy you and steal your fiancee, booty booty booty shaking everywhere...

I will let my avatars handle my reaction for me, in their last appearance ever, before sending them both to the sunset inside the Shame Car.
MoreX: Gaah! I knew it! I effing knew it! He's going to destroy us! This is all your fault, Xerom!
XeroM: Please! He's kidding! he loved it! You're just overreacting!
MoreX: Yeah...maybe you're right!
XeroM: Nope! He is definetly going to kill us!
MoreX: Gah! Please don't say that!
XeroM: whatever! Get in the Shame Car. We're leaving!
MoreX: Goodnight, everyone!

[Morex25]

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It was suppoused to imply that MoreX isn't really Me (the author) though he believe he is. After absorbing XeroM, MoreX bealives he is the real MoreX25 (me), The both of them don't realize they are just mere avatars for me.
Or if you read my TL;DR.
They are just characters for me to eff around in the comments and say stupid crap.

[Darkus Relling]

Well, shite. We've got our personalities talking.
Darkus: At least I'm not as crazy as you.
Touche.

[Isshiki Kotonashi]

Don't get me started on personalities! They'd never shut up.

[Wise2Fox]

PINKIE & DAN VS ........................ MOREX!

[alexanderhunt88]

Just kiss already!

[Morex25]

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I would love to do something like that...but not yet.

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Not for another few chapters....It has to be a very special momment, it can't just happen anywhere!

[alexanderhunt88]

3290445 Curse you important plot points

[Morex25]

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Dan & Pinkie VS. Danielle & Berry (Bubble)?

[Freewing Alchemist P]

yah, everything is back to normal.
Well as normal as it gets for Dan Vs. any way
I was getting scared for a few chapters but is was still fun to read.
Glad that Elisa didn't die and Flutter shy got laid.

Well good luck and best wish
I hop that you can keep up with all your stories.

[Transivity]

3293903 hmmm, makes sense... if I don't think about anything.

[DeathOcty]

I want to hug Xerom!
And I cant leave out MoreX so have some Cake!
MoreX's cake shall be delivered to him later.

[Morex25]

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Keep on reading.

[Morex25]

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XeroM: Ha! See, I'm more lovable than you!
MoreX: S-shut up! *sits in a corner* still waiting for the cake...

[Spirit Shift]

“It’s because these last chapters of our lives felt really weird.” Dan arched an eyebrow at her but he didn’t say anything and let her continue, “as if something that happened just got ret-coned or erased and I can’t figure out what or why.

lol niiicceee