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After Rainbow Dash discovers that they're in a cartoon, the Mane 6 and the Cutie Mark Crusaders look themselves up un the internet. Needless to say, they are not pleased with what they find.

Now a little disclaimer: This was all in questionably good humor. No disrespect intended. Please don't shoot the author!

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Well.... this made me depressed about the whole situation. :fluttercry:

I can't stop Laughing.

What.

I usually have accurate critiques to write... but... what.

I laughed my ass off, then I realized that they hate us now:raritycry:

And just like Murphy's Law, they had to pick the absolute worst MLP content on the net... :facehoof:

:rainbowhuh: wat

Although I thoroughly enjoyed the concept. Too bad they didn't get to the music.

:rainbowhuh: Um. :derpyderp1: Hmmm....:unsuresweetie: I think it was... :derpyderp2: ... yes. :rainbowderp:

My reaction in nine letters
OMG, WTF? LOL!

I think I just woke up my entire house with my laughing. I REGRET NOTHING!

This is a good idea, but I wish it had been executed better. The plot didn't seem very well structured and, along with a major glaring plot hole, this fic had issues. It did, however, make me laugh a few times, notably when Dash wrote down the website when everyone else was cringing. :rainbowlaugh:

I kind of liked it a little. :twilightsheepish:

However, I REALLY object to the ponies swearing like that. It's just so out of character.

I also wish a more neutral voice could be added or something. I mean, yeah, there is some really, really disturbing and horrible things about MLP (and a good amount of it done my people who do it for the "lolz"). But not all of it. How come the ponies all went straight for the most horrible stuff? Why they didn't go to a more obvious site, like Equastria Daily?

The entire fourth wall.

It just...vanished...

Ye gods...

They hate us now...

"Not all of us are bad people! Where are you going!?"

246188
Thanks for the feedback! I might revise it later to include some of that noy-so bad-stuff. And maybe less swearing. :twilightsheepish:

Feedback?! EEeeep.
That wasn't a full, proper critique. That would take time.
However, if I can ask one thing: what prevents the ponies from just stopping whatever recording they are playing? I mean, a few glances at rule 42 would be enough, there is no reason for them to go trough the entire archive and stuff.

Aarrggg, my sides are hurting from laughing so hard. :rainbowlaugh:

finally someone writes this:twistnerd:
>my favorite parts were probably
1. Pinkie Pie knew they were in a television show the whole time
2. they read Cupcakes
3. the cosplay

but what if it all ended on good terms. like all the ponies are sitting there in silence. but all of a sudden Pinkie Pie starts laughing. and since laughing is infectious everypony in the room starts to laugh with her. and they all begin to appreciate the absurdity of the entire dillema. that this whole time every adventure of theirs was captured and preserved so that some strange creatures on the other side of a television could enjoy them. Pinkie Pie knows that in reality she would never do the horrible things that happen in Cupcakes, so she is able to look at it with all of her friends and laugh at the insanity of it all.
And then when they return for a second trip into the fandom they find all of the silver linings. the ponies see that friends of theirs like Derpy Hooves, DJ P0N-3, and Doctor Whooves would have never existed without these fans. They discover all of the good fan fictions that exist behind the big wall of crap and clop that usually clutters others original thoughts about the mistaken art form (no diss to those who write clop fics). And soon the ponies find that devotion and care are behind all of the strange behaviors exhibited by the fans.

and then they still reject it and shun it:yay:

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Not a bad idea! :yay::yay::yay:

Just before they clicked on the rule 34 thing i was like NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

>mfw Rainbow Dash wrote down the R34 link
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Oh man, this is one of the funniest things I've read. Moar.

246188 They went to those first because of Rule of Funny. Also, many of this fics are in fact on Equestria Daily. I doubt that the ponies would know what Grimdark would mean, even if they did see it. I never knew what it meant until I started reading fanfics. Of course I have ample supplies of brain bleach so I can read most grimdark things without a.... long lasting, effect. There was only ever one that stuck with me... Agony in Pink....... eeeerrruuuggghhh.

that was the funneist thing i ever read i loved it :heart::heart::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::yay:

Hehe pretty good

So what's the moral of the story? None. There is none



(Laughs)

Love it, nothing entertains me more than biting self-satire:derpytongue2::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

"You are not truely civilised until you learn to laugh at the faults of your own culture" - :scootangel:

poor sods.:fluttershbad:

You don't want to explore the dark side of the internet like that, without some knolwedge of what's out there first.

My laughter won't stop. It cannot be contained.

there are nothing wrong with us....i think?

Oh my god! This is...


THE MOST HARILARIOUS FIC OF MY WHOLE LIFE!

You Sir/Madam are a awesome writer!

I couldn't stop luaghing at the shippings, and the Caramac thing! That killed me of laughter! I was laughing so hard I passed out, and the neighbors heard my laughing! Best fic ever!

Gets: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: of 6!

Nice Job!

~Princess Starshine out!
Peace :duck:

Jesus tap-dancing pony Christ! That’s disgusting!
That was my favorite line out of this whole thing.
Perfect.

We are crazy indeed :pinkiecrazy:

Wow :rainbowlaugh:

Do you mind If I translate it to spanish? :ajsmug:

Sweet Celestia! My tummy hurts from all of the laughing... :pinkiegasp: They REALLY must hate us all now... :twilightangry2:

Of course Dash wouldn't mind hooking up with Soarin. :rainbowlaugh:

I have an idea for something akin to a sequel/AU, is it okay with you if I try my hand at it?

Awwwww.....they didn't get to my favorite part.
The Selfcest R34.
Phooey.

What the hay did I even witness it broke the 4th wall like twice in one go XD

Luckilly Friendship is tragic the audio drama was not a thing when this fic was written, Oh the PSD whey would've had.
Me as a 33 year male get the chills when thinking of that name.

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