Matthew is your typical teenager. But he is also a Brony. He is a bit immature, but is a good young man. His parents trusts him completely, and with that, they both go on an important business trip that lasts the whole length of summer vacation. Shortly after they leave, six humanoid creatures are teleported in his home. Hilarity ensues.
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Contains: some strong language, immaturity, and a Cupcakes scene.
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Point out some errors or grammar problems, because I type stories on my iPod.
-The Good Doctor
3010801
Well i'm not the only one then
This story is great so far,( personally I will be reading this on the premise that it isn't anthro sorry for that) I hope this story continues to be awesome, and I can't wait until the next chapter.
P.S. very impressed it was done so well on an iPhone.
3010853 Thank you, man.
I do hope your ACTUAL cupcakes
3017202 Maybe........
MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR please
3038387 Workin on it! Also gonna add a little something something!
;)
-The Good Doctor
hmm,
would be 'Bye Matty', unless you have a sale?
Maybe put paragraphs into the summary too?
The descriptions came out lively, but somewhat undisrganised and thus less than ideal. Try to go over them in order to get them in order?
drop the space before the coma, right?
2 paragraphs in the story was feeling way too long, more of bricks.
Love the story dude also y was it canceled