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DarthMaul22


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A thousand years of banishment. A thousand years of plotting, brooding, and hatred. Finally, a chance to try again.

When all that is stopped short in an instant, can bridges be mended between two immortals?

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 3 )

This is pretty good so far. The tone goes well with the writing, there aren't many grammatical or spelling mistakes, and it's a topic that while isn't uncommon, is still not overused. You sir/madam have won yourself a like and a favorite. It'll be interesting to see what comes next.

-Xeron

Nice. Nice flow, it feels natural.

5081128
I had completely forgotten to mark it as complete. :twilightoops:
Sorry to disappoint.:fluttershysad:

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