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The First Night

A thousand years of banishment. A thousand years of plotting, brooding, and hatred. Finally, a chance to try again.

When all that is stopped short in an instant, can bridges be mended between two immortals?

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Xeron

Xeron #1 · Oct 1st, 2014 · · ·

This is pretty good so far. The tone goes well with the writing, there aren't many grammatical or spelling mistakes, and it's a topic that while isn't uncommon, is still not overused. You sir/madam have won yourself a like and a favorite. It'll be interesting to see what comes next.

-Xeron

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