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I'm a 31 year-old female from Tennessee, find me over on Deviantart! --- http://mychelle.deviantart.com/

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Hey! Not bad. I like it! :pinkiehappy:

Lol Karma I like that name. Good chapter again :yay:

seen- saw it's last days

That right there is punishable by death

I was thoroughly ashamed of myself when it came to mind, I assure you. :ajsleepy:
(Even though it did make me giggle a little...)

Well at least he survived

Yeah not a good idea for him to fly above the clouds

Pff.. He is Enclave soldier, he MUST know their politic about missing soldiers very well. Probably someone already get foal-certificate now. :pinkiecrazy:
He is white. With blonde mane and blue eyes? It seems he not is understand how a damn fuckin handsome he is. :rainbowkiss: Especially for wasteland's standarts. Especially considering he is a pegasus.:twilightsheepish:
Karma and all that stallions are just friends? Looks more like siblings. Or foalhood friends. :trixieshiftright: She put her hooves on Cloud and everyone takes this well. :raritywink:
Good chapters. Write more. :twilightsmile:

Cloud was never one for being "too" smart. :ajsleepy:
But he surely makes up for that in looks! Too bad he as no clue, lol.

Well it looks like they have some sort of civilization that doesn't do anything bad, good chapter :yay:

Ooo.. so many characters. So many details... Awesome! :pinkiehappy: They looks like group of talanted ponies. As DnD party! :rainbowlaugh:

Ooooo... Cloud have some problems now.. :pinkiecrazy:
Awesome chapter! Social interactions and all shit! :yay:
Write more of this shit please! :twilightsmile:

I'm liking this. More! Pleeeease?


No worries! I haven't forgotten this story at all. Ive just been VERY busy with holidays and stuff! But I wont give up.

3020886 :pinkiegasp: I see you on nearly every Fanfic I go to read. Way to make a name for yourself. :ajsmug:

Hehe... Oh, blyat sorry, I have new job now so I am temporarily out of FoE. But yes I am faithfull to this community nahui. :twilightsmile:

I know i'm a bit late to the party but for future reader please fix this error.

Karma had at some point mentioned that we would get food and water soon as we reached the rest of their 'gang' in a bit, btut that felt like ages ago.

good story so far.


Fixed! Thanks for letting me know. Its hard to catch every error without a beta reader. x.x heh

The song fit so perfectly with the ending of your chapter. well picked. Ii'm really enjoying your story. kudos to you madam. :ajsmug:


Glad to hear your enjoying it. =) Its been awhile since Ive had the time to add a new chapter, but that will be coming soon hopefully when I get everything caught up! I wont be giving up on this story by a long shot.

nice story, I think I'm going to add it to my favorites.:pinkiehappy:

I'm really enjoying your story so far. I especially like your idea about karma's magic, how it shows magic exist without having a horn (although I have a feeling that it makes it hard to channel without one). You are making me really curious to see where cloud, karma and the rest of the group will go from here. :ajsmug: I hope to see this become even more amazing than it already is!

Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)


Oh wow. Thanks! I really need to get around to getting a new chapter out...real life is so troublesome. x.x heh

6711415 I hear that. Only recently managed to get chapter three of my own foe book out. ^-^; Though that was mainly due to my editor being a tad slow. lol


One of these days I might find a beta reader / editor. Ive been mostly doing everything single handed/(hoofed...ed?) by now.

"What the flying fuck just happened, and who the hell are you?" I snapped at her. Pain didn't put me in a polite mood.

And apparently that tone of voice wasn't appreciated as she turned and I got a quick buck to the side of my head with her right hind hoof. My head dropped to the floor just as sparkles started popping up, and my vision beginning to go blurry.

"Karma," The mare said quietly as I was just barely able to notice her stepping to my side. It sounded like she was un-doing some of that make-shift armor of hers, but by that point my vision had completely blacked out with the closing of my eyes against the oncoming lack of consciousness.

"...you might have noticed, I'm a bit of a bitch."

HA! nice. :pinkiehappy:

"So, about the See-Aie-Kay-Eee thing earlier...what's his deal?" Maybe spelling it would be better.

Nope, not illiterate apparently. Stan stumbled, coughing and quickening his pace to a much faster trot, as if he was trying to fight the urge to bolt away from the two of us. Karma rolled her eyes and groaned before doing her best to catch up and motioning for me to follow. When I got re-caught back up she turned her head towards me in our half-run.

"He is terrified of the things. It's a secret to everypony."

ah, a case of Jophaboia, i take it?

I couldn't hear anything at first, well, except the soft static sound. But then, a stallion's voice emitted over the machine's speakers in a low soothing tone. It was strange to me, just the voice echoed softly as he spoke of dreaming and stars, and Stan was softly rocking his head to nothing but the tone of the long-dead voice.

I can just imagine....

DAMNIT! Wrong song! Sorry! Sorry.

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