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It takes place after Twilight forgives Trixie for what she did in the episode "Magic Duel", and Spike doesn't buy it. He runs off in hurt and Applejack and the others tell Twilight that Spike really missed Twilight and how he really sees Twilight as his family. Now Twilight has to fix this problem between her and Spike.

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I had to immediately favorite this. Another beautiful and touching Twilight/Spike fan fic. I love how Rarity comforted him in the hug she gave him, and Applejack placing a hoof on his back while he was crying. Twilight is indeed like a mother to Spike I feel. If I may ask, do you maybe take requests on fan fictions? I ask, because there is another fan fic I think should be written. What happened with Spike during "Sweet and Elite" on Twilight's birthday, in which he was invited. :fluttershysad:

2998000 I would do that story, but somebody already beat me to it and did a good job. Look up "Spike's Apology" and you'll see what I mean. :-)

2998062 Oh, okay. Thank you for telling me that. Also, keep up the great work. I am a huge Spike fan, and stories like these just warms my heart with how he is loved and cared for, and most importantly treated as if he really does belong. :pinkiehappy:

2998082 No problem, but if you want to request anymore Spike and Twilight stories, I'd be more then happy to try and take a shot at it. :-)

Now I understand why this got the cross-over tag!

I don't like twilight and spike relationship as mother and son.
I prefer to think of them as siblings or lovers, and the mother of the spike should be Twilight Velvet or Celestia.

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That's squicky when you think about it.

2998135 Oh, okay. Another episode maybe you could write about Spike being absent from is "Sonic Rainboom". With everypony at the young fliers competition cheering on Rainbow except for Spike. :fluttershysad:

Jiminy Cricket? Really?

3015082 You should humor this guy. Does it all the time. Really loves those Disney films.

May I ask what specifically you didn't like about "Magic Duel"? I didn't like the episode either, but I'm curious to know what it was you didn't like.

3457975 Check out the review of it on my blog. It's nice to know there are other people other than myself you don't like Magic Duel. But what did you think of the story I wrote? :-)

3459438 Cute :twilightsmile: It's always nice to see some focus put on Twilight and Spike's relationship.

Read the blog, and we certainly agree on the core of what's wrong with the episode (Trixie's motives) though our opinions on certain details seem to differ

3462402 What do you mean? :-)

3462412 Replied on your blog :twilightsmile:

2999877 I think Spike had to finish cleaning and reorganizing the library.

A cute story but I do wonder if the Jiminy Cricket scene was necessary.

Hey, sorry to bother you, but Black Kyurem just now realized that Spike's flashback in this story is exactly the same word for word, not to mention Applejack told it to Twilight both times. Black Kyurem is somewhat amazed and confused that you were able to pull this off and get away with it.

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Yeah, I get that this image is a legit reason to come up with a flashback and maybe hate the episode to no end.

okay who listened to the when you wish upon i star song :rainbowwild:

The feels!!!! :fluttercry:

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