Following the story of To be a Wonderbolt. Rainbow Dash, Wonderbolt "retiree" tries to make her life work with managing two jobs, fame, and a growing family. With the old problems still being faced some new ones come across. In the midst of planning a wedding and rebuilding a town, Rainbow Dash's ever growing popularity becomes a problem when people question why the Wonderbolt Super Star has been performing in less shows. Paparazzi and fans a like continue to pester her even when trying to enjoy time with her family and friends.
How will Rainbow Dash and her soon to be wife Fluttershy handle all this while trying to build a life together?
Can Pinkie's problems ever be fixed?
When Rarity starts getting famous will she fall down the same road that Rainbow did?
Will Applejack's insecurities lead her to remain single with her foal on the way?
How does Twilight deal with her emotions when she realizes she has feelings for two ponies?
Will the CMC ever get their cutie marks?
So many questions read on to find the answers.
The cover art was used with permission the artist is named Aurora-Chiaro
And you already made to chapters
Applejacks thoughts "somethin' great if they that happy together" shoulden there be a "ware" between They and That
2999275 no if they that happy together. that isn't used as a "that much" not as "that thing" it's a bit of slang talk or just engrish but it's commonly used. Like for example "some guys say I am that into the show. "
2999620 oh.. Ok.
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I still thank you for pointing it out. I don't mind being wrong I just haven't been in the editing mood as of late but one day I am going to edit both my stories so it runs smoother. But today my goal is to dive into the new chapter. It's going to be a good one if I say so myself XD.
3000544 ok sounds nice. but do you know any horrifying fanfics that i can read while waiting? i don't know why but i find them really intertaining
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ummm... horrifying ones? I don't really read them to be honest since I kind of hated cupcakes even though my fanfic has some references to it. I just was not a fan of Ponies I liked dying with bloody gore I can accept ponies dying in fanfics as part of a story but sensless murder isn't my thing. I am actually thinking about writing a story that isn't Canon to this series of fics about an alternate ending to the Mysterious Mare Do well episode. It will feature Rainbow Dash turning evil and making a villain to combat Mare Do Well. If I write it it will be a dark fic and mature because it will have a lot of dark and mature content. Just a thought though not sure if I will go through with it. Because I am enjoying writing for this fic series here.
3001203 i found somethings to do while waiting for the chapter to come out.
i also like your idea about the "mare do well" fic but it will be a good idea to wait with that since it looks like your useing most of your free time on this amazing fic and i don't think it's a good idea to have another project running at the same time as this one but it's your decision to make not my or anyone elses
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Well have to head out to socialize hopefully this last chapter will leave you satisfied a bit till I return. This one is very sad... I almost cried writing it. So enjoy the feels Cannon
3001867 i am satisfied
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Well off to work next chapter probably later today if I have time
Good so far
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Glad you think so it starts to get to the main plot of the story around chapter 3 I think after the whole FlutterDash vs Vintavia thing.
Thinking about adding a Tragedy tag before I write the next chapter I would like some feed back about it. Does this fic warrant one so far? If you haven't read the latest Chapter Requiem of a Fallen Failure I suggest you read up to that point and let me know
I would put one seeing as how death happens from time to time in this series. By the way, this is a great sequel, unlike many that i have read, you didn't try to "remake" the same adventure or scenario. Plus you have gotten better at comic relief, I don't find myself tearing up as much as I did before, but I still feel the sadness of the events. Also, (and I don't expect you to add the character as it would be awkward to try and pull off) in your mind what happens to Discord?
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Discord in canon left With Celestia in season three so he is at the castle in his own 'chaos' if you will. He only helped Fluttershy because he was snooping around the castle at the time in the last fic. This story may not contain any Discord unless he is a guest at the wedding. I have no plans for his madness this fic.
Thanks for the suggestion I should put tragedy in here. Because this story while a love story is a story about consequences of a selfish dream. Even right now she is trying to build her family RD is still living the celeb life. Also with no spoilers, if you read already through you know whats going to happen to Pinkie and Pinkamena... a choice will have to be made but is it fair to choose a friend over another living soul? Identity Crisis is the name of the next chapter it will deal with mostly Pinkamena/Pinkie identity and Scootaloo's sexual preference. Ofcourse Rainbow will be mentioned since this is a Rainbow Dash centric fic though not as much about her as the last fic.
Also I appreciate you enjoy this fic. I put hard work into it. The issue with the story and my writing style is I plan out how I want it to go but when I write I just let the fingers flow and sometimes they match up or sometimes I find some new way to go about it. Lightning Dust's fate in that last chapter (no spoilers please) was just how I felt it would make sense since I didn't feel like going the redemption route for her.
Just an FYI I don't mind dislikes. Honestly if someone dislikes my story I would just like to know why. I won't change it but still it's better for me as new fanfiction writer to know why the readers dislike my content so I can learn what went wrong.
I know my stories aren't going to be liked by all and that is never my intended goal. I am writing stories for they can be read. As long as my stories get read I think I succeeded.
So again I don't mind critisicm and I don't mind negative comments as long as it has some sort of constructive approach. For example
Negative Comment "I think your story wasn't as good as X, and it could have been better if X didn't occur"
Troll/Stupid Comment "Your story sucked, FlutterDash is gay"
So feel free to let me know what you guys enjoy and don't enjoy. Especially since I like feedback.
The end of part one was epic, though Rainbow Dash is becoming almost too powerful, like superman with no weakness. The cliffhangers are gaining much of my interest and I can't wait to read about them.
5/5
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Rainbow Dash like superman is canon I am afraid since season 3.
She takes a wing hit in the Wonderbolts academy worse than the Daring Do episode and shrugs it off and continues flying.
She and Lightning Dust made a tornado that took 70+ pegasi to roughly make.
Season finale she summons a tornado that strong to bust all the clouds during the whole "friend in deed" song.
In sleepless in Ponyville she effortlessly breaks through trees with her a flying drop kick. The force necessary to break through three trees is roughly enough to shatter solid stone. Which Rainbow Dash does to with some recoil in Spike at your Service.
Now imagine all that happening before the extreme training a Wonderbolt must go through.
The wonderbolt has been shown to be part Show Pony Squad and Part Military canon. My brother was in the army and the training there is like no other.
All that + the fact that she mastered the Sonic Rainboom in season 2 kind of makes you wonder if the show itself isn't making Rainbow Dash a supermanesque pony?
Also she isn't that powerful. Her body was taking massive damage from Flash Sentry still the whole city being destroyed was from the resounding shock wave of the magic that held protected the city from her entering being hit by the force of a sonic rainboom. If you don't understand how that works best I can describe it is. Putting a giant bell over someone's head and hitting the bell from the outside... comedic to watch but the shaking inside the cartoon characters do are due to the vibrations surging through the body.. aka the entire city shook to it's own doom.
As for weakness. Rainbow Dash has always had a couple of weaknesses in canon "Ego, pride, blah blah." but for this Rainbow Dash her main weakness is her lover Fluttershy. But I am getting ahead of myself. Don't worry the whole Rainbow Dash is awesome factor slowly drifts off as she becomes tamed....
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Why thank you..
next part of the fic will show a time skip and roughly sum up what happened post part 1 ending. Lot's of stuff happen between the next part and this but. I would take 100 more chapters if I didn't sum things up and just went to what I want to get to. I found out I been writing more in details about events and just enjoy doing so
Another good chapter can't wait for the next one!
3017926 Writing it as we speak.
NOOOOOES SHE CANT BE DEAD... can she
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I can't spoil it... plus I am still trying to calm myself down from the tragedy that I wrote out.. Next chapter will answer that question just know I will try to get the new chapter up tonight. So then you will know the fate of the pony in question
so this chapter starts out with a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream inside a dream. don't really like it when that happens but is still a great story. hope to see more
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Sure... just more it was a dream that ended up in a dream of another dream but through those dreams another dream was being dreamed by the one dreaming. Though some parts weren't dreams and pinkie's dream wasn't a dream.. gah now you got me confused
Anyways next chapter will be out tomorrow morning. I am planning on doing at least three chapters tomorrow. Each one will be full length chapters and each one will tackle subjects that have been necessarily avoided. So yeah hope you keep reading because tomorrow is a special day for readers as I am going to hit you all hard with chapters.
Sorry, wasn't hating. Should have stated superman is my second favorite and I meant it to be a compliment. Remove the "though" and add a exclamation point at the end of weakness. Not too good with grammar.
I am at a lost of words. I'm just gonna sit back and relax, because this story is in the hands of a genius.
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Never said you were hating. I don't mind negative feed back or positive. I love Superman and I love Dash so either way it was win win.
3020814 Too kind I appreciate this compliment I really do it really helps me to write more knowing people actually enjoy my work.
Doing some light editing nothing major and no story change. Just fixing some stuff that I find while correcting the border lines.
Kind of expected this, but I gave up on this idea a while ago. Then you brought this chapter in and half-way into the chapter I yelled "Knew it!"
3023109 Yeah well life just doesn't buck up all around you at that pace unless something is helping it go along. well the chapter I just finished writing will be a super cliff hanger until I find my zone and finish the last chapter I plan on writing today. Not the final Chapter mind you just for today I have one more planned in me. But it will be a good one :P
wait... the ending... as in the ending of the series... OH GOD SAY IT ISN'T SO... NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOES...
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No... the ending of this fanfic series lies with the final fic. I intend to complete the trilogy and after I have a fourth one planned that follows the events of 10 years after the trilogy ends. Though as it stands it's getting harder to write long chapters. I think it's from my brain frying or from the fact I spent this weekend putting out like 30k+ worth of words on fictions XD.
I love your writing!
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Glad you do. You should check out my other stories I have written some comedic shorts that have been getting popular.
3030794 remember when all else fails PLOT TWIST
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I already have some twists in plots coming up. This story gets crazier near the end for good reason. See somethings about this story you will remember when you see what I have planned. Just remember any odd part of this fic has meaning. It will all come together like before. I don't write randomness in this fic. If it happened in this fic it did so for a reason. Like my next fic of this series. It will have some epicness that wasn't revealed but was mentioned in this fic. So keep paying attention to things.
3030932 I read the awesome death on but I will defiantly check out the others.
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My favorite one personally is Fluttershy Wears Reading Glasses. It was posted after Rainbow Dash Dies An Awesome Death but.... The first story was inspired by the premise of the second story.
Sounds like hotdiggedydemon discord...
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Discord got bucked up this chapter.
Also soon this fic meets it's end point ... So I will be finishing this up either by tomorrow or Wednesday
CAN'T WAIT!!!
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Tomorrow evening the latest I think I shall have the next chapter up :P
Dear,
. it will have a place in my heart forever
keep on writing my good friend. i hope to see more of this series in the future.
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This story(and series) is so good... i am going to be sad to see it go
- your friend forver, odycay12
YAY FOR LETTER FORMAT
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it's not over yet
There will be a final chapter or two today later on and then I shall start the final story of this series sometime this month
So awesome!