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When the powerhouse country Discordia begins improving its military, a sure sign of war, Equestrian Princess Luna goes on a diplomatic mission to a mysterious country on the opposite side of the planet. Rumors indicate that this country has power and technology beyond anything previously imagined by the Eastern Countries. Does this mysterious country even exist, and will they provide military aid against Discordia?

Has some Tron-like elements; humanized ponies

Sequel here

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 17 )

Its a good start for your first fic.

Is that the Falken from Ace Combat?

wait....thats all it just ends here?

Comment posted by Verathuum deleted Jan 3rd, 2015

2997960 what will or is it called?

3068148 I'm not sure what I'll call it yet. I haven't posted it yet, but I'm working on it. I just got a break off college so it should be finished soon.

their hulls were coated in aluminum for extra protection

Wat? Really? :rainbowhuh:

Its aluminum plating and intricate heating made it almost indestructible by Equestrian standards

Oh for the love of... :facehoof: they're gonna need the help.

Either way it's fun XD
But which is more irresponsible? Drunk, as you got yourself drunk then did it than being sober and just said "fuck it, i'm game" or something along that line.

So much Tron.

Eeeeuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugh.

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For what? At least it isn't a lead zeppelin.

The description of the suit makes me think about the uniforms in Tron: Legacy.

Great. It's a sci-fi version of A Quiet Place.

He is sad because of a spider and nonchalant about the dead of all the people on the ships?

This suicidal dude that jumps from a cliff to test if it still can fly lived that long, without killing himself in some stupid accident? Sight... This story doesn't makes sense, it's unbelievable.

doing while being drunk is more irresponsible because you do not think clearly while sober while irresponsible you are fully aware of your actions

im a decade late i know but falken moment

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