• Member Since 3rd Aug, 2013
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okamierik


new to fanfic writing

Comments ( 6 )

This is quite a good story mate.
Although I did catch a few quickly misspelled words it holds a lot of potential.
Can't wait to see more from this.

~Reggie

3049605 thanx a lot,`working on spelling every day I can :twilightsmile:

3049847
Its not like its a lot. its probably because of your fast typing and words are typed off. Like letters switched and words fliped. Its not much but its noticeable.
But anyway its still a great story

~Reggie

I love the story but I can't count how many times the spelling messed up the vibe the story was giving it has potential but the spelling you really gotta fix that besides that it's a good story

4898026 thanks, am not the best speller but it try hard to find the time to fix the spelling.

The griffins are the soul inventor of the flintlock gun witch became very popular in other parts of the world, but guns only became used in Equestria until the development of the revolving action and only became popular after ponies mounted large rifles on too battles saddles, witch allowed a rife to be fired from a saddle, soon after guns replaced most military weapons in Equestria. After an arms race with the zebras, and the increasing threat of changeling invasion, guns became common place in Equestrian homes.

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