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Follow ten best friends, the Doctor, Ditzy Doo, Lyra Heartstrings, Bon Bon, Octavia, Vinyl, Sparkler, Carrot Top, Colgate, and Berry Punch. They may be the most unlikely group of adventurers in all of Equestria, but together, they work together to fight demons, overthrow tyrants, and travel through time. Can these ponies overcome their differences to save Equestria, or will the inept travelers just leave a trail of destruction everywhere they go?

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Comments ( 7 )

Great story. Can't wait for other chapters :rainbowkiss:

I'm not a tremendous fan of the one sentence paragraphs, for some reason its a pet peeve of mine. But this, was very well written, little to no grammar problems, and had a well blended group of characters. My only issue was that you didn't describe the setting until you already entered the characters, so the plot (lol, pun) was a bit hard to keep up with. I give it an 8/10. Good story, I will be waiting for the next installment.

nice work great story cant wait till next chapter

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Thanks so much for the advice. I will start working on the next chapter as soon as possible. Thanks for reading!

holie shit this is bucking amazin u better put taviscratch bonlyra and DR.derp ships in this !!!!!!

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