Anton's search for the truth about his dead brother takes him to the Crystal Empire. As all hope slowly fails and the ponies of Equestria have said their last goodbyes, it falls upon Anton and his friends to fight for what little is left of the world
Remember when people told you that making your story so distant and separate from what the fans knew of the show was hurtful to the story? That not having main or side characters they knew features prominently hurt the tale? That making everything needlessly grim and gritty and hopeless and dark just spat in the face of what the show was about, and that you needed to bring more familiarity into the tale?
Evidently as your ratings for this story reveal, I was not alone in thinking this. You've got twice as many dislikes as you have likes and it's only your second chapter. You had a chance to fix the major issues of your last story but you essentially ignored the sage advice you got.
Remember when people told you that making your story so distant and separate from what the fans knew of the show was hurtful to the story? That not having main or side characters they knew features prominently hurt the tale? That making everything needlessly grim and gritty and hopeless and dark just spat in the face of what the show was about, and that you needed to bring more familiarity into the tale?
Evidently as your ratings for this story reveal, I was not alone in thinking this. You've got twice as many dislikes as you have likes and it's only your second chapter. You had a chance to fix the major issues of your last story but you essentially ignored the sage advice you got.
What do you have to say for yourself?