• Member Since 12th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 16th, 2012

RagingBrony19983


I love MLP.

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Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 4 )

errr.....a little grammer mistakes here and spelling also...but ovarall still understandable...

but isnt ur story a bit too short? 300+ word doesnt really bring you far nor tell the readers what is going on....so expand the story

242611 I know there are some mistakes it was the middle of the night when I wrote it and I didn't have much time to finish but there is going to be more than one chapter. I never do 1 chapter stories. :pinkiehappy:

243893
ok sure thing....just make it longer...my only request from you....i waana enjoy reading good story...:yay:

this was so sad :applecry: poor dissy

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