A romance focusing on Snips and Silver Spoon. The Grand Galloping Gala is almost among us, and Snips has had a crush on Silver Spoon for a while and she has always liked him as well, but he is too shy to ask her and her friendship with Diamond Tiara conflicts her to say yes.
If you want to read the short prequel, click here
Rated Teen for: Strong Language, Drug Use and Suggestive Themes
I actualy like this paring thay need more story's together
Good chapter (he about to get some in the library) can't wate for the update
2978523 Thanks I'm glad you like it, also you'll have to wait for Chapter 3, for his experience in the library
2979169 that's cool but.... Um..... One think..... WHERE THE HELL IS CHAPTER 2
2981544 It'll be done in a few hours
Nice story, SilverSnip is an interesting ship.
2995909 Thanks
I don't know about you but if someone called me adorable I'd take that as a insult
Damn I just got done reading the second chapter and I see that the third one got posted
That's crazy
Heh heh. Pineapple Express. I caught that.
Awesome story but. Do I have to read the 5th chapter I mean its 85% just like the 3rd chapter
3075955 Yeah, sorry about that, it's just I want to tell the story from both of their perspectives, sorry about pretty much recycling the same chapter
Is silver spoon afrade of the dark
Well aside from a few spelling errors this story is pretty good. Although a few chapters recycled for changed prospectives its still a good story in my opinion. The only thing that confuses me is how old are they supose to be? The amount of profanity coming from them, the fact that s n s are smoking pot, and finally the sex. Not that it really takes away from the story I would like to know around what age range are you trying to portray with them? Other than my not so important opinion good story i will follow it to the end.
3326130 If you read in chapter 4, there is dialogue between Snips and Snails. Snails asks Snips what he thinks he'll be doing in ten years time, Snips in return, ask the same question,
And Snails says, "Living with my parents"
And Snips asks, "At twenty-three?"
Do the math, and you have your answer on how old they are.
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woops I guess I missed that. Well that my answer boy do I feel like a derp. Oh well good story anyway.
An update, I'm reading this tomorrow in school
Some good stuff here wonder how it wil play out. Keep up the good work.
Ponies eating ham and bacon seem so wrong
But I love the romance slowly blossoming and the revelation that DT has a mood disorder. Could be that she's bipolar or suffers from depression or both in my case.
3519783 I know making them eat swine seems wrong, sorry And thanks for liking my "DT has a mood disorder" idea
Yeah that song pretty much sums up my feelings if BEST PONY Silver Spoon agreed to go out with me to.
So how old is Silver Spoon and Snips?
3520918 In this story they are both 13 along with DT, Snails, etc. If you read chapter 4, they pretty much mention that fact
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I have the same gripe. Rereading the same scene in a different pov is a minor annoyance, but worth it to see through the eyes and mind of Silver Spoon.
Speaking of her mind she sure has a vulgar inner monologue for an up and coming young mare of class.
Pip is a playah
Code S? Never heard that one.
3521978 Well. At least you say it's a 'minor' annoyance, but I don't really care, it's how I'm going to tell the story
should be I'm such an idiot
Other than that nice chapter I like Snips and Silver Spoon's relationship so far. Keep up the good work.
Silver Spoon.. do you kiss your momma with that muzzle?
3521978 yah but he could instead of make 2 chapters with each POV he could intertwine them into one chapter and be like while this is happening to Snips this is happening to Silver Spoon
The only reason I tolerate it is because I like this paring and this dudes wrighting
It bothers the hell out of me because just like doing math I hate writhing/doing frivolous steps that don't get you closer to the answer (or in this case the ending
(And pluse why do I have to show my work in math when I do the work in my head, it's not like I'm coping off of people in my class cuz I'm smarter than all the other kids in there and why can't I talk to my friend in math class about math (that's like geting kicked out of a English class because you were reading in your down time it's not my falt I finish my work faster than all of the other kids) when the kids in the back of the class are on there phones and cursing at one another man fuck school you don't even learn things any more all school is, is remembering things and taking notes which we both know I'm not going to study. All school is for is spending half of your life preparing for your life to start when it has already started sinse you were born)
Hopefully the tickets don't end up being fake that would be so bogus and a little predictable
But still if that happend how would he get new tickets befor Sliver Spoon finds out
ugh. DT why must you been such a big bitch?
3877509 Try seeing it from her perspective, she has a mental illness, I made her bitchy but she has a reason to be a bitch
Woah I do say I have missed this story glad to see an update, and a rather refreshing one none the less. Hope to see more updates.
I think you mean correlating or coinciding not contemplating.
3077571 instead of copying the chapter word for word, perhaps you just restate key parts of the dialogue from the previous chapter as place holders and focus on what goes on in the mind of Silver Spoon as opposed to Snips's thoughts and viceversa. Having to reread the entire scene is slightly annoying.
I disagree. I think Silver Spoon is being far too generous toward Snips and Snails.
If I set a building on fire, then called the fire department and the flames consumed the building despite the firefighters' efforts, whose the real villain and whom do you blame?
Me for setting the fire or the Fire Dept for failing to save the building?
Trixie was unjustly demonized for her part. Rainbow Dash's ego and narcissistic love affair with herself is just as strong and every pony loves her despite her being just as annoying a braggart as Trixie.
but thats just my opinion.
3879941 you gave her a personality disorder not a mental illness. It's not the same thing and does not excuse her behavior. A personality disorder can be overcome but the person has to want it and be willing to work on themselves to improve.
also-
I think you forgot to mention what exactly Snails did to gross out the girls.
again I think we're missing something. What dirty joke?
wait Piss joke? I did not get that. I thought Snails farted or burped.
the thing is Snips told Diamond and Silver that Snails went to the bathroom but Snails was never in on the lie. Unless I'm missing something.
I totally want to read Silver Spoon stoned off her plot now LOL
what did Snails do or say that was perverted? Is this about the "piss joke"?
7228091 Eh, dude. I might change all the stuff you commented on, looking back on this story, I don't think it's too great. I will continue it though, eventually. I hope you were still enjoying it.
7230258 oh yeah I am still enjoying the story. I still think Silver and Snips make a cute couple here and I love how both of them have to contend with an antisocial friend who constantly embarrasses them.