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TheGreatEater's Buffet1,155 stories ·49 members

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While dying somewhere in Equestria, Chrysalis looks back on the invasion and her mistakes, trying to figure out how she failed her people.

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TheGreatEater #1 · Sep 24th, 2013 · 1 · ·

I braced myself I could while doing multiple flips through the air.

myself the best I could

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I couldn't watch a whole have die.

hive

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Well this was a good short fic.

nioniosbbbb #2 · May 24th, 2015 · 1 · ·

not her to fill

here*

"You can't be serious." Celestia chuckled.

You make it seem like Celestia is talking here.

I think you should have given this a bit more time to settle down. You said there were three changelings? What happened to them?

In any case I think there should be some form of Sequel.

Princess OtakuGeek

Princess OtakuGeek #3 · Oct 18th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I like it. You need to add more. Like Chrysalis bringing her hive back. After this, I have to see her second chance.

Putainnn

Putainnn #4 · Jan 10th, 2016 · 1 · ·

more pls

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