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Dinky Hooves has always had a pretty good life. She has an excellent mother and sister, and, well, an absent father. But when he finally shows up, Dinky knows everything will be fine... right?

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Chapter 1 · 1st Aug 2013 · 1,495 words
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Chapter 2 · 9th Sep 2013 · 1,377 words
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Chapter 3 · 15th Oct 2013 · 438 words
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Chapter 4 · 5th Nov 2013 · 1,122 words
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Chapter 5 · 5th May 2014 · 1,260 words
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marineproductions100

marineproductions100 #1 · Sep 8th, 2013 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Do we get more?

cheesecow123

cheesecow123 #2 · Sep 8th, 2013 · · · Chapter 1 ·

3175623 Yes i'm just really really slow

doorcf

doorcf #3 · Sep 14th, 2013 · 2 · · Chapter 2 ·

LOL
nothing more I can say

VampDash

VampDash #4 · Oct 15th, 2013 · · · Chapter 3 ·

Crossover with what?

cheesecow123

cheesecow123 #5 · Oct 16th, 2013 · · · Chapter 3 ·

3353112 Doctor Who.... sorry if I didn't do it correctly

Twilight cat

Twilight cat #6 · Jan 4th, 2014 · · · Chapter 4 ·

I love this story.
This is such a good story and when are you making part 5?
As the rating you get 10/10 yays!

Void Keeper

Void Keeper #7 · Jan 12th, 2014 · · · Chapter 4 ·

Good and all, but why do they hate dinky

cheesecow123

cheesecow123 #8 · Jan 12th, 2014 · · · Chapter 4 ·

3730004 YOU ARE SO SWEET I LOVE YOU THANKS

cheesecow123

cheesecow123 #9 · Jan 12th, 2014 · · · Chapter 4 ·

3774794 I'm sorry I'm being really slow right now but what do you mean? Who hates Dinky? Again I'm so sorry

Void Keeper

Void Keeper #10 · Jan 14th, 2014 · · · Chapter 4 ·

3776683
In page two/or chapter two, however you call it, the doctor said "This demon spawn belongs to someone else." and it doesn't look like sparkler likes her ether.

P.S. Its still a good story, keep it up.

cheesecow123

cheesecow123 #11 · Jan 18th, 2014 · · · Chapter 4 ·

3783625 haha this really lets people know how stupid i can be Yes, you are totally right, Sparkler does hate Dinky. I can't tell you why because that would spoil the story! And the Doctor called her "demon spawn" because she wasn't exactly being very nice to him, and he didn't know she was his daughter yet. If he did know, that would greatly change his opinion of her and he would give her a chance to show her personality before making a snap judgement like that. Thanks so much for the compliment!

Nyan Eater