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I write pony words that people seem to like. I also review fics and draw purty pictures, apperently. I'm an older fan of MLP, so expect a lot of 80's references.
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Well, I enjoyed that. I don't know what your usual stuff is but you did this pretty well.
I don't think that is the way you spell a female hero's name (heroine not the drug name) in the description.
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Good eye! I forgot the e on the end... fixed!
That was pretty cool.
You actually did it!
And it's great fun, too. These two characters are great fun, and need much more love (Chickadee Peachbottom especially).
Finally, a question. I've never seen Ms. Harshwhinny given a first name before... is this her official first name?
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I couldn't find a first name for her, actually. She seemed like a 'Nagitha', so I went with it.
Thanks for the idea too.
My original concept was not nearly as interesting as this turned out to be. 
I really liked this. Your characterizations were excellent. I kinda wish we could follow these two around or back to Mustangia, but I understand this is a one-shot.
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I usually hear her referred to as Lovingcup Harshwhinny. But Nagitha works too!
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Thanks! I've really started to like these two, so who knows, maybe I'll write them some more later on.
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Glad you liked it! If you get the time, try out one of my other fics. They're mostly good(ish).
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Given her Cutie Mark, I could see Lovingcup as a first name. Comical too with her canon personality.
This was very enjoyable. You might want to edit this and extend out the chapter some after the contest, because the only flaw I had with it was the world building with the mustangs not being terribly interesting. But in a longer chapter, it's less of a problem due to it being a bit more spread out and coming off like less of simply "exposition!"
Plus, this gets an up-vote for having a damn good introduction.
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I might expand on this after the contest is up. I enjoyed writing it even when fighting through my writer's block. Harshwhinny and Peachbottom were both very easy to write.
Neat story, really well written and interesting. Awesome!
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Why thank you very much!