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Golden Paw


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A survey ship of the Quedra Empire discovers a planet filled with hard working equines. Though a number the species are deemed unsuitable, the hard working earth ponies are judged to be of use. To confirm their first impressions a pony is selected for study. They soon find out that. The subject calling her self Pinkie Pie is nothing like they were expecting and chaos ensues.

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Good read! I liked it! It is funny how the Quedrans made a battle situation out of dealing with childish antics. 'And that's how the Quedran empire was...unmade' :pinkiesmile:.

"There you go, things are so much better with friends and cake."

Ya know what they say; the fastest way to a Quedran's amygdala is through sweet and sugary mentally implanted thoughts" :rainbowlaugh:

Glad you liked it. The whole idea just popped into my head and I am glad I did a story on it. :pinkiehappy:

CCC

...brilliant.

Those aliens never had a chance.

3913030 Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for taking the time to read! :twilightsmile:

:pinkiehappy: ← That pretty much sums up both the story and my feelings about it. :eeyup:

Frequent minor grammar and spelling errors aside, this was a truly enjoyable read.

5272098 Thanks so glad you enjoyed it. Yes grammar and spelling are my on going foe, one of these days I'll get it right :rainbowdetermined2:


One of these days I'll get back around to ironing out the kinks as it were on this story :twilightsmile:

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