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Flaring Dawn


Pinkie Pie passes on, leaving behind her secret journal. Twilight and her friends decide to read it to calm their mourning. They find it full of memories of her life, and memories with her friends, and also secrets never meant to be seen.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 66 )

Gotta say this story is really good. There are a few minor errors but other than that it really hit my heart. :applecry:

i like it and i can't wait to see next chapter of this story and i wonder what stuff they will find in Pinkie's Journal

awesome and i can't wait for the next chapter to find out what the next entry is about

Not bad. Besides some very minor grammar and pacing issues, this story is pretty good :twilightsmile: I'll be giving it an upvote and a favorite.

2971224 thank you very much!! ill try to work on the pacing in the next chapter.

Oh... the feels. :raritycry:
Can't wait for the next chapter!

i love it :pinkiehappy: and i though you forgot about this story because you have not posted a chapter in a while

2990549 ill never forget the story, was just writers blocked :twilightblush:

2996076 ok :pinkiehappy: and i can't wait for more chapters of this story to come out

i forgive you for the wait and i love it

2996413 thank you!! im glad you are enjoying this story!! thank you so much for your support :pinkiehappy:

2996663 your welcome and yeah i do and your welcome for so much support

2996714 im thinking about the next chapter as we speak

2996685 I know, some of this was hard for me to write :pinkiesad2:

2996745 welp going to read the things we leave behind now :pinkiehappy:

Never thought Fluttershy would use the stare on her own big sister... :derpyderp1:
Who knew that Pinkie would think of her old rock farm home as a prison? :fluttercry:

2996748 ok and i got a question what do you mean by you want to read things we leave behind now

This music paired with reading this story.....

I has a really big sad now. :pinkiesad2:

I can't stop crying. The present tense adds to the ambiance of sorrow.

Just read the first chapter. You are as bad as me for bringing tears. Can't wait to read the rest.........

your welcome and *hugs you back*

WHYYY DID I HAVE TO READ THIS!!!!??? :raritycry::applecry::fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::raritydespair:

Good story so far friend, gotta keep going!! PS: At least it wasn't as emotional as Fluttershy dying story cause I kind of cried.....a lot.:fluttercry:

Thank you everypony!! Thank you all for the love and support :pinkiehappy:

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D I think that the next chapter might reveal some secret and all the elements are going to go on an advernture and find something of pinkies blah blah blah...Lol anyways i can't wait to see what comes up next! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

*sniff sniff*...:raritydespair: wait a sec...MUST READ MORE! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Wow nice conflicts and stuff.What can I say? I'M HOOKED! :pinkiehappy:

I feel for you Rainbow...and wait twilight? Thats the best exscuse you can come up with for reading her journal?i would have told rainbow that it would leave us alot more happy reading her journal and pinkie would want us to be happy and you stuff like that.

ok and i love it and your welcome for the love and support

3046725 The last chapter will be worked on tomorrow and then i will be writing a new story. Possibly a shipment

Wow. I am so glad I faved this. It's sad, and makes her seem so sad. But It's so nice to see her side of things. I can't wait to see what happens next.

your welcome for the love and support

3051004 I finally finished this one!! I am so happy with how it turned out, thank you and everypony for everything *hugs you all tightly*

3051025 yeah and I am so happy with how it turned out to and your welcome and *hugs you tightly back*

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