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Mike wakes up in a field, having no knowledge of how or why he is here. He only knows that his life is no longer what it once was.

Attempt two at a story I started a few days ago. Didnt like how it was progressing and I needed more practice. So I started over. please let me know what you think!

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Comments ( 15 )

I like it but there arr some grammar errors not mamy but a couple

2964907 I see what you did there xD and thanks I'll be sure to proofread more carefully for my next chapter

Just an update chap 2 should be up by tomorrow!:rainbowwild:

Make that today, couldn't get it just how I like it. I should be able to get 2 and maybe 3

2965980 awwwww:fluttercry:! THIS.IS.THE.WORST.POSIBLE.THING :raritydespair:

2965980 Fic= Good start looking forward to it !

2988140 Ill have 2/3 up by this evening.:twilightsmile:

2990352 Yay ! :yay: XD :trollestia: BTW you from US ?

2990486 sure am, Colorado to be exact

2990691 Cool too bad for me though (or good :twilightoops:) I will only be able to read them tomorrow as US and EU have a 9 hour difference:raritycry:

2990817 Lithuania that's near the Baltic Sea + Denmark + Germany :twilightsmile:

2990840 I know were Lithuania is xD only some Americans are retarded hahaha

2991536 XD you made a typo :facehoof: it's "Where" :trollestia:

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