• Published 1st Aug 2013
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Sing It Out - GjallarFox



Short story I wrote for the TwiShy group contest. Twilight has been noticing her marefriend of four years start acting a bit shifty. What could our favorite adorable pegasus be hiding?

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The Dragon's Roost

Something was up. It wasn't just that she'd return to the library half an hour later than usual every other day. Nor was it that exactly three months ago she did not come back to the library. No, it was her voice that made me suspicious. It had gotten quieter, more reserved. Almost scared. It sounded shy and timid, as it had when she'd first asked me out some four years ago. It shook a little when I called her name, and caught in her throat when I asked about her day. I tried to figure out what she was doing, but I never managed to figure it out. But she was here now, and that was all that mattered.

I breathed in her warm scent, holding her warm body in my hooves. I could never tire of the fragrant mix of aromas that clung to her fur and mane. Ginger, lavender, cinnamon, rose, lemon, all present in varying degrees. She nuzzled up against me, her soft and aromatic mane encompassing my nose. The intoxicating scent drove me mad slowly. One breath was all it took to make me forget any problems I'd had in the day. Two breaths and my entire day was a haze. Three breaths made me but a puppet at her command. The ninth breath was my personal chloroform.

I snaked my head around and applied a gentle peck on her cheek, to which she hummed approval. We were just lazing after an afternoon nap, cuddling up with each other. There wasn't much excitement to the day. We'd both gone to her place to take care of the animals, taking a leisurely stroll in the park afterwards. There was a small window of about twenty minutes after that where she'd gone off on her own, but her excuse for doing so was acceptable. But even so, I couldn't help but feel a little suspicious.

"We have to get up, Twily," she murmured softly, turning herself to face me. "It's Thursday night, and almost six."

"Oh yeah, Poetry Night," I mused groggily. "But it's so comfy right here..."

"We aren't missing this one, Twily," she intoned firmly. She stared into my eyes as she said it. My mind, in turn, took the external message and indoctrinated it into my own priority list.

"Mmmm fine," I groaned, allowing her to get up. I pulled myself to my hooves, my joints making cranky cracks and pops from the movement. My muscles ached from lack of movement and made my motions feel stiff and mechanical. Once both of us had stretched and popped joints, we trotted out of the library together.

We walked slowly, as old couples did. We were in no real hurry as far as I knew. We were passed by ponies young and old, some couples among the crowds. But we maintained a relaxing pace, making the five minute walk take ten. The whole time, her wing was draped over me as though to show that I was hers and no one else's. I couldn't help but smile. Her warm wings always felt soft to me, yet felt as protective as steel armor.

We turned left at Sugarcube Corner, walking down one of the busier streets of Ponyville. Many couples walked in the same direction as us, like Lyra and Bon Bon. Soon though, I saw ponies that weren't normally at Poetry Night entering The Teapot. Our other friends, Rarity, Pinkie, Rainbow, and Applejack, were there in front of the place watching us approach. They did not wave, but greeted us with smiles and warm cheer. However welcome their presence was, they set of thousands of alarms in my head, and raised almost every red flag there was.

Pinkie's left forehoof twisted slightly counterclockwise. Before I could raise my eyebrow, her mane poofed out into a spiky mess that made her appear less huggable than a porcupine. In a heartbeat, it was gone.

"There's a doozy on the way!" Pinkie gasped to herself, marveling at the new Sense.

We stepped inside the hole-in-the-wall teashop, a slightly larger than usual crowd greeting our ears and eyes. Dozens of different blends of tea made their scents known to the rest of the shop, each fighting for control and dominance. However, Neither anomaly was quite as noticeable as the stage being occupied by a few musicians. One with a guitar, one with castanets, Octavia with a string bass, and a microphone set up for a singer. It was entirely out of place, and very much piqued my curiosity. I looked towards Fluttershy, who strangely bore a stoic expression of deep meditation. Something was up, and I wanted to know what.

The usual pitch-black unicorn stallion that held charge of Poetry Night leapt onto the semi-crowded stage, taking the microphone in his magic. He coughed lightly to clear his throat,"Khmm. Good evening, fillies and gentlecolts, poets and guests. I'm sure you've noticed the musicians behind me. They are for a special reading tonight, which I've been asked to keep hush-hush by the pony performing. Tonight shall proceed as usual until exactly eighteen-thirty this evening, at which time, the band will play along with the mystery pony, after which everything shall, again, proceed as normal. I'm done yakking my jaw off. Carrot Top, you're up."

As the nameless black stallion had mentioned, everything went as normal. Carrot Top read a poem about the rain from the perspective of a carrot. She called up somepony else who read a rather dark one about black rain and poisoned air. I sipped at a cup of lavender tea that the barista had brought me, having known I'd want it. I didn't even taste the near-scalding beverage I sipped at anxiously and the usual relaxing sensation that the tea brought failed to calm me in the slightest. I watched the clock, each tick of the lethargic second-hand loud as a sonic rainboom. Painfully slowly, the seconds became minutes, gathering lazily one by one. Five, three poets had shared their works. Ten, five poets had read. I'd drained my tea within fifteen minutes, and subconsciously waved for another.

"Alright, it seems tine for our performer to come to the stage and make final preparations," the black stallion informed at precisely six twenty-five.

I felt my breath catch in my throat as I watched Fluttershy rise from her seat, timidly walking onstage. Her bowed head and tightly clamped wings told how nervous she was to everyone in the teashop. But I saw the subtle signs of just how intensely anxious she was. A slight double-step here, a tail twitch there, but most important were her eyes. They were open wider than a yawn, but the pupils were small as pinpricks.

She stopped before the microphone, her knees shaking visibly from anxiety. She spoke softly, "H-hey e-everypony... Um... You all know wh-who I am... I did write something... but, um... it's another dedicated piece. I wrote this lyrical poem for my i-incredibly beautiful marefriend of four amazing years, Twilight... "

I felt my heart skip a beat, my eyes widen, and my cheeks flush at the same time upon the mention of my name. Many scattered ponies bear their gazes onto me, a few heads nodding in my peripheral vision.

She continued on, "Well, um, I've been waiting and planning this for a long time... A year, actually. I've only recently managed to dare myself enough to do this... So without further ado... Holding You..."

The guitar player started with a quick flare of his instrument, pausing for a while for the castanets to play their part. He re-entered with bright chords and fast strums, while Fluttershy slowly drew breath for her own entry.

"When everything's right, I told you,
I loved you with warmth of flame.
Ever since then, nothing,
has been, the same..."

Octavia joined in on the bass, deepening the sound and completing the ensemble.

"I wished for the day you'd love me,
the day when I'd feel your heart
beating slowly, with mine.
Gently dancing, in time...

Our art...

And I just want to hold,
you in my arms, tonight.
And I just want to know,
you'll be in my arms...
Tonight..."

I was completely enraptured by her voice, so much so that I held my breath until she let the note fade. I tried to take another breath, but it caught in my throat. I tried to move just slightly, but found my muscles locked in place. I was paralyzed by her singing.

"A year passed us by, and so you
showed me what love could be.
You set fire deep inside me,
and helped me see...

Though I already know the answer,
something's been on my mind.
Listen closely, to my heartbeat,
it'll tell you in time...

In time...

And I just want to hold,
you in my arms, tonight.
And I just want to know,
you'll be in my arms...
Tonight...

So come to me, love, I'm calling,
there's something I have to say."

She beckoned me onstage, though I couldn't move. I felt somepony give me a shove to get me moving again. I stepped onstage as the band played a loop while they waited for me. I felt my heart pounding, and my knees were weak. Something was definitely up, but I was clueless. I stood awkwardly on stage, holding my breath, waiting for my marefriend to continue.

The band softened to barely audible volume.

"Will you be my love forever,
from now to the end of time?
Will you be there, to hold me?
Will you forever..."

She paused and dropped low to the floor. from her wing, she pulled a very small feather that looked to be one from her early foalhood. I raised a hoof to my mouth, drawing a sharp breath. I awaited the line I knew was next; the line that would confirm what I now realized she was doing.

She proposed, "be mine?"

The room fell silent. The band cut out, and the crowd held their breath. In the corner of my eye, I saw Applejack's jaw hit the floor, Rarity swoon and near faint, Rainbow gag on her tea, and Pinkie hold dead still.

I fell back on my rump, my knees having collapsed from beneath me as shock took over. It all suddenly made sense. The days being half an hour late, the night she didn't come back, the shake in her voice at my inquiries... They all made perfect sense. She'd been working up the courage to propose to me. My heart pounded in my ears louder than any explosion. My cheeks became red-hot within seconds, and I was sure everyone could see and feel how I was reacting. But even though tears burst forth from my eyes, I felt the single greatest smile to ever exist curl up on my lips, making Pinkie's appear as infinitesimal as a tiny squirrel with a cheeky grin. I forced a breath, choking on the one word I needed, "Yes."

The crowd erupted into applause, stomping loudly against the tile floors of the teashop. Rarity fainted, falling over uncaught to the unforgiving floor. Applejack brought her jaw back and fixed it in its place. A proud smirk appeared on her face as she tipped her hat to us. Pinkie swelled up like a balloon, Rainbow trying her best to hold her back. However, she soon failed. Pinkie exploded into a bright display of party decorations and accessories. However, I didn't care about their reactions. All I cared about was the pegasus that had thrown herself onto me. Her lips met mine and her hooves wrapped around me instantaneously. I melted into her loving embrace as soon as my nerves registered the contact, and as I did, the world dissolved away. The only things I heard were her heartbeat slipping in sync with mine, and the soft breath she drew. All I felt was her hooves around me and her soft lips against mine.

And that was all I needed.

Comments ( 40 )

im attempting to remain a man after reading this so forgive my explitives.
THAT was fucking beautiful.
i.... it....... just..
damnit. it was lovely,there happy now.

I couldn't keep myself from smiling. I think you may be making TwiShy my favorite pairing.

Holy shit that was so touching, good job on this story man

That, was just lovely.

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I have succeeded in my task, then.

<3 DarqFox

I think you should do more TwiShy stories, I would most defiantly read them :D

2972753
Check out my other stories. I write almost nothing but TwiShy.

<3 DarqFox

Really? Holy crap I'm so checking them out right now :D, btw, this story was one of the best TwiShy stories I have ever read! Being completely honest with ya :D

I would have joint but the theme was difficult for me! :twilightsheepish:

This is really good, love the way that Fluttershy propose to her.
And that song is realy nice.
:yay:

2972799 I already loved the pairing, but I have a soft spot for Luna so Luna x whoever is typically great for me. That being said, man this DarqFox guy can write some good stuff.

... Darq... Lars approves... I approve so fucking much...

2972814 I have to agree! :pinkiehappy:
Just remember, TwiShy... TwiShy!

Oh... oh... oh...! That was so beautiful, Thank you! So many lovely tears on my face.... So much love! :yay: :twilightsmile:

Now to pore through your other works, that I might cry some more :heart:

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

Oh you my friend did a great job I nearly cried it was that good keep up the good work and I have to say that's my favorite Fluttershy Twilight shipping fic well done

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I believe the ship name you're looking for is: TwiShy :trollestia:

Anyway, before you go saying this is your favorite TwiShy fic, go read my proudest work, The Frozen North.

<3 DarqFox

Just. . . .wow. . . too many emotions . . .
Male Pride. . . Will not cry . . . DAAAMN!
LOVED IT!

:pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile: / 5

A very nice piece to be sure. My only problem is that they are these short installments of their relationship. I want to know what goes on in the intervening years.

Looking forward to more.

2972753
You do know what "defiantly" means, right? Don´t you mean "definitely"?

2973914 sorry didn't know that, was a bit tired when I said that so yeah

2974391
Ahh okay, thats understandable, I wasn´t trying to be mean or anything.

That was just so touching.
I'm glad no one else is home to see this dopey smile that still remains on my face.
I already knew exactly what was going to happen by the end of the first paragraph though. Don't know how I knew, I just knew.

Anyway, I can always expect this kind of quality from you Darq. Good job.

2974459 ik ik but thanks for finding that mistake for me

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Not bad. There is a small ribbon in a thread at the group that you can post in the long description if you wish.

"We walked slowly, as old couples did."

That confused me, as it made it sound like THEY were an elderly couple. Maybe I just read too fast and missed the "asked me out four years ago" line

Alright, done with complaining.

Even by TwiShy standards, this was ADORABLE. I kind of had a feeling where Fluttershy was going and what the surprise was, but by no means was that a bad thing, quite the opposite in fact. Unlike in the Last Roundup (I predicted the outcome of THAT episode before the opening theme rolled :facehoof: ) it made me look forward to the big revelation. Having 'Shy be the one to propose for a change was definitely an interesting touch, and the reactions from the rest of their friends were perfect! I also enjoyed the implications that there WERE in fact ponies in the know regarding Fluttershy's plan.

I'm not that interested in poetry, but Fluttershy's poem was just beautiful, I was grinning shamelessly the whole way through.

You aimed to make a beautiful, adorable story, and by Celestia you succeeded.

:yay::heart::twilightsmile:

:ajsmug::rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

Finaly got to read this, this was beautiful! :raritycry:
I really didn't know whart was going on until I reas

She proposed

I am THAT slow sometimes :derpyderp1:
Because I never expected Fluttershy being the one to propose! :rainbowhuh:

Too good sir. This was phenomenal! A true work of art! Great job!!

That was... :ajsmug: awesome! Never stop writing, Darq, alright?

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I don't plan on it.

<3 DarqFox

... okay, I've seen a lot of assorted pairings among the Mane Six, but I think this is the first time I've seen Twilight Sparkle and Fluttershy being shipped together!

DarqFox, this was pretty much the best possible thing ever! :yay::twilightsmile:

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I believe the Ship name you're looking for is: TwiShy

Now. This was just a one-shot. You want real adorableness, go read The Frozen North.

<3 DarqFox

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You color-coded the shipping name. Amazing! :pinkiegasp:

Might just go ahead and look up The Frozen North later. Tired puppy right now. :yay:

Poem was great, Setting was AWESOME. Keep up the amazing work!

Loved it! I don't get the feather thing, but this was cute nonetheless.

WOW that was... Just beutifull
All that is needed now is a telented female singer to preform this song.
Rating should be relativity easy but i have to be fair.
A 4.9/5 not perfect but extremely close, the only problem i have is my previous statement. It's dificult to write a fic that has a song in it. OK that you give us the melody (and what a great choise you made) but it's dificult to know when a line starts or how long a line is. Now that is just a minor nitpick but that's my comment.
As a side note we need more TwiShy out there just saying :twilightsmile: :heart: :yay:
~Tobben

This story was so cute adorable and beautiful I loved every bit of it!

Have a 100th like. :twilightsmile:

Whoever disliked this had to have been drunk and seeing double.

That was a good story.

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