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I'm older than your average brony, but then I've always enjoyed cartoons. I'm an experienced reviewer, EqD pre-reader, and occasional author.


Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash treat their friends to a day cruise that they won. Everything goes swimmingly, ship-shape, or whatever other nautical pun you prefer. Of course, everything in Equestria always does.

Now on Equestria Daily!

Thanks to Grif in The Training Grounds for his help with a review.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 25 )

“Go Team .. Is this what were doing now? :rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh:

the beginning was the best part for me, but over all this was fun to read, and now I have a new battle cry “For all that is sweet and sugary!”

Oh, this again! Now that I found it once more I shall leave a word. :ajsmug:
Smooth Sailing was the first story for me that showed up when the voting started.
And it was a very enjoyable start! :twilightsmile:

Hm. I clicked for FOUR HOURS to get it to come up once.

Congrats on getting this on ED!

Pinkie Pie is best pirate. Yar.:pinkiehappy:

Zyrin #7 · Aug 17th, 2012 · · 1 ·

:pinkiesmile: is best pirate. Hooves down.

Delightful read. Tad shorter than I was hoping, but wonderfully done either way.

Oh, I needed that!:rainbowlaugh:

Excellent stuff! Very cute and tons of fun, ought to have been an epsiode:yay:

That was great!

lol you captured all of their personalities very well! this was very enjoyable :derpytongue2:

Beautiful, innocent and funny. Well done!


That is all. :twilightsmile:

Also, this was... well, I don't know quite the word for it... Very nice will have to do!
This was very nice!


But... but Sea Foam is a unicorn...

I still wonder how much the silver coin pinkie found was worth, I love hunting with my metal detector but most of the places I have acess to are over hunted and not much cool stuff remains.... though I did find part of a pop can from 1985, that was cool.


Not bad. :pinkiesmile:

Also, Pinkie's been listening to too much Alestorm lately. :pinkiecrazy:

No, that's Sea Swirl.
Anyways, loved the story.

1104500 There shall be a sequel wherein it shall be learned that the coin was a denarius... and was oddly 'blackened'... :trixieshiftleft:

Harry Dresden will then be required to save the day. :raritywink:

Now i have to see the pmv for jacket thank you for this epic crossover idea:pinkiehappy:

A very entertaining story! The concept of Twilight writing a successful Daring Do fanfic is very cool, and makes alot of sense. I felt a bit sorry for Sea Foam, though... Glad to see Twilight reconciled with Rarity.

“I fell off the rock wall and sprained my ankle.  But the nurse colored it brown for me, so it looks like a peg leg!” 

Leave it to Pinkie to make the best out of any situation. ^_^

Ahh, this was a very entertaining read. I liked the scenes with Twilight and Rarity.

This is so hilarious!! :rainbowlaugh:

Pinkie Pierate... this is so great.:pinkiesmile:

Also, it's a nice, simple, fun story-line. This wouldn't make a bad episode.:yay:

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