Soarin' was closer to their father than Wave Chill was, so when he suddenly passes away why does Soarin' go as if nothing has happened? Soarin' promised his dad that he'd become a Wonderbolt and his dad promised that he'd be there to see every show. Now that it's not possible anymore, how will he cope with the academy and can he still achieve his dreams of following his fathers legacy by becoming a Wonderbolt himself?
Sidestory to the Trapped Series- but it can be read alone since it happens beforehand!
Edited by the brillWolfePony
Before i start....
Yes... i read lightning fast... so i have read it 5 min after it was posted...
And now to the main thing...
It seems promising! I like it so far!
I cant wait to see where you are taking this!
2964936 Thank you!
Dem feels
Great work on this, it's really great :)
Okay, take me like and fave
Only thing is this:
Just seemed a little awkward to me. Maybe a comma or something is missing there- I'm not sure. But I'm looking forward to this, and I don't favourite stories often :D
Overall it's really well written so far and I'm expecting some good things and some feels.
One question, though: is this related to any other story of yours?
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Ah! Thank you, it's an honour that you favourited this then!
I shall add a comma in after school then, it does make sense!
2964961 Thank you! I can't wait to write the next chapter
This is such a stinking amazing idea, though. I really wish I thought of it for my series, because I'm having trouble with the sequel right now. Ideas are all there, writing style isn't going so well. So congrats on the great idea! I'll check out the other stories too.
2965056 I dunno how I ended up with an idea like this to be honest, I briefly mentioned it in my other fic and thought "Hey, I wanna do a side story of this!" XD
I know the feels of writers block, I can't wait for your new chapters but take your time and read around for inspiration
Thanks!
2965116 Thanks, and yeah I'll do that. I find songs give me more inspiration than anything else. I usually get my ideas at 4 in the morning, or coming home on the subway/tube and listening to music.
2965127 The first 10 chapters of my Scootaloo fic was written at 4 in the morning
Music helps a lot though!
2965136 My best idea ever popped into my head when I couldn't sleep last week. But I'm finding that writing it on paper while sitting outside has improved my writing. I won't uploa it until it's done, though. It's really sad and something I never thought I'd write before.
2965144 Somehow, I'm better at writing sad fics, or fics that are full of feels That's kind of why I'm excited about this fic... I can relate to most of mine in someways, especially this one.
Sometimes its a better idea to wait until you've finished a fic because then you have a lot less pressure to actually complete it, and you can take your time with it.
2965167 Yes. Yes. That's EXACTLY it! I wish I did that more...
2965193 Same but I always get so excited to upload it!
Oh boy! Time to fave and rate this, because I already know it's going to be worth the read when I dive into it
2965276 Ah, thank you! You're brill, I hope I don't disappoint!
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I really enjoyed it!
What a...
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surprise!
Name: No Longer Soaring.
Grammar: 9.
PROs:
Good Grammar, like always.
Great atmosphere; a young Soaring and his family.
The most beautiful scenario will be destroyed by sadness.
CONs:
Some missing, very few and rare, but missing.
Sometimes people need something bigger than this, but, It’s ok.
That only has one chap… yet (?)
Note Section: Good luck with your Soaring/Trapped series ^^.
I wish you enjoy my review, and if you don’t mind, please help me out by looking at my story/this story: The Journal of a Hunter
2965405 PUNPUNPUNPUN!!!!!
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Teehee... Punny
I'm still giggling about this, omg, what is wrong with me...
I'm glad you liked it!
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Ah! It's brilliant how "the most beautiful scenario will be destroyed by sadness" is a pro! Thanks for the review, I shall check it out...
Awww yis
2967034 I hope you liked it
I LOVE it. Can't wait till next chapter. I must demande more.
2968478 Well, sadly I'm going to Ireland soon so there won't be an update until mid August! But keep an eye out for it!
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No worrys, I'm going to montreal august 3rd. so I'll be okay.
2968499 Ah, I'm going on the 3rd too! :D Have fun!
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NO WAY !!!!! Have a good, and you have fun too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2968525 Thanks!
2968272 Of course I liked it!
Happy times I see. Why am I getting a bad feeling here.
2971077 Eeyup... Nothing is ever 'happily ever after' XD
Just started reading but I saw that. Oops
3073241 Whoops :P Lemme sort that out
Okay, it's done XD Thanks! :)
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Well damn. This struck me. I didn't cry, because I sadly never cry, but this reminds me of when my grandmother died (at a very young age) when I was five and we were at a cottage. Happened about as suddenly as this. But it was well written. When I have time I'll read the other stories of the series.
3073294 Yeah, I was kind of in Wave Chill's position but I couldn't bare to make Soarin' be the one to find him...
And I surprisingly didn't cry when writing this. I've cried when watching Anime before, not gonna lie...
3073332 Dang. Well, I'm sorry for your loss. At least you use it for inspiration :) Basically that's what I did for Violet Hill when my friend died. I just used all the crap I felt and compressed it and wrote it all out. It made me feel so much better, like I was telling people what I'm going through indirectly.
3073351 It happened 7 years ago now, so it's alright anyway, it wasn't your fault... I'm sorry for your loss too.
I agree, it is an indirect way of doing it and it does feel better afterwards. I'm just glad I've gotten this chapter out of the way now
I need to catch up on your fic though
3073455 The sequel is more of just minor romance and backstories. It's not anything as good as Violet Hill. I'm coming out with a Scootaloo story though, with many feels
3073490 Nah, I'm a sucker for romance and backstories, I find it interesting!
Oh! Yay! I love Scoots! I shall look out for that!
3073500 Glad to hear. It won't be released until it is almost finished, though. I want it edited, redited... basically I want it perfect and nearly complete, that way there's not as much pressure to keep it going.
3073512 I know what you mean...
Oh my gosh, in Ireland I was so bored so I started re-reading trapped and Replacing Scootaloo... Holy Celestia. I need to rewrite! It was so bad! But, that will probably be in the future
3073519 So it was boring there? Why?
3073539 Well, I stayed at my Nana's house and there came a point where none of my family came down and we had been up to the town already so I just sit and reread my old work And wrote, I wrote quite a bit actually
3073546 You know, that's actually not bad. Sometimes you need time like that. Like when I go and visit friends and family away from the big city life. It relaxes me and I don't feel pressure. My best ideas come when I least expect it and have no pressure. That's good to hear
3073553 Yeah, I had lots of ideas. Some that I didn't even expect to happen. Especially in my Scoots story... I had a good time though, it's nice to get away from the internet every once in a while
3073560 Oh my God yes. So true!
3073568 Plus, I managed to get a couple of chapters ahead so I have a little less pressure on me to write now... It's hard to keep 3 stories going
3073610 Ugh. I agree with that, sister!
3073627 Hopefully I can get a big bulk ready, but maybe I'll take your idea and secretly write a story then upload it when I'm done...