During a cleanup, Twilight discovers an antique mirror. What mysteries does it hold, and why is the handle seemingly incomplete?
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This was disterbing in a scary way i dont know how i should feel about this mirror thing
So THAT'S what happened to my mirror...and my shadowself.
You didn't by chance happen to find a dreamcatcher web lying around nearby did you Mayor? Without that covering the glass...nasty things tend to get out. 
That...was...
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Don't interrupt me Charlie! But yeah.. what he said!
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It even disturbed me..
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Charlie Sheen picture comment? Check one off the bucket list..
EDIT: Ratings and comments would be appreciated.. I just counted and (at the time of this edit) there are as many ratings (good and bad) as tracks.. (and more tracks than comments).. Which is odd since the original concept was to only write a one-shot. (I'll probably expand on the story though)
Huh?
Something similar happened as I was shaving. My reflection just simply left. I am wondering if it...
WHAM!
*dies*
It was something new... interesting. Too bad that there's not going to have a wrapping up, though.
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I feel bad 'cause comparatively it got so many tracks, so I'll probably add onto it with an alternate cast and maybe/probably work the mirror towards Canterlot/the Princesses..
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I was gonna shave in the morning..
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'Bout to get my lumberjack swag on..
... That was pretty disturbing... not Cupcakes *shudder* disturbing but still... nuff said
250917 Do it in a new story. Leave this one be; its grim and dark setting over the mane6 is good.
Meh. Pretty weak in my opinion. No buildup, barely any tension, uninventive conclusion, did I mention no building tension? At this length, it would have been much better if something more interesting happened to the characters. Alternatively, it could have been longer, either with a longer period before the mane 6 meet their fates, the reader (and possibly the characters) suspecting something is ahoof and growing increasingly frightened, or after with orhers suspecting/finding out/reacting to victims of the mirror being replaced by monsters. As it stands, this fic does not produce more than barest beginnings of horror atmosphere at any point.
i wish you could make a second part or a epilogue xD, this was awesome but a little short :P
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Fair enough.. Length when it comes to all forms of writing is usually hard for me to sustain, I'm trying to work on it.
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I'm considering another chapter with a different character set.
the cmcs at sweet apple acres sounds farmiliar like sweet apple you know what wilh bad big evil mac uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
ill get you and make cucakes too
also soo discusting your story scary but very well writen!! you earn a pinkie pie
bravo
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I've looked in the mirror before late at night and my irises were glowing like an animal's when you shine a light on their face. Weird thing was, the bathroom lights were off...
I think if you fleshed this out much more, it would be really good.
Here's something I noticed when I went to the bathroom to shave, after I read this story.
Look your reflection in the eyes, then look away. Now look back at your eyes again. Keep repeating this until you feel like your reflection's still staring at you while you're looking away.
Hey, that reminds me of this thing I fou-
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Sorry, I feel like sleeping soon, lol
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What's tha-
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Ok, interesting, creepy, and I'm lost on the intended ending.
Evil mirror
Mane 6 die........ ok then still facinating though
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The six's spirits/souls/etc(open to interpretation) exit the mirror/alternatereality/etc and kill the mane6 assuming their places. At the end the copies are portrayed as having 'integrated' (semi)successfully into Ponyville society while the mirror has received (fairly) widespread local fame, thus continuing the cycle. The escaped souls/etc are represented by carved ponies on the handle, which is shown to span chronologically as evidenced by the varying degrees of wear on each individual carved pony, inferring the artifact's ancient legacy.
Not bad, but it didn't really scare me, due to the lack of suspense.
Suspense really makes a horror story scary.
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My lack of skill and dedication coupled with the advent of graphic media would ensure a lack of horror..
People still get scared from books?
I'm gonna try to write a second chapter/seperate side-story though, so I will definitely take your input seriously.
To the general audience: Character set ideas? (e.g Derpy, Octavia, Vinyl, Bon-Bon, Lyra, CMC)
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I wouldn't call it lack of skills. The basics for a good horror story is there. You'll just need to flesh it out some more, thicken it up, create some suspense...
And yeah, people can still get scared by written text... Did you read Cupcakes? I couldn't read it though without getting too sick to read further 3 times and almost fainting almost at the end...
I got to the part where Pinkie got stuffed in a barrel...then I couldn't stop laughing because I got reminded of that episode of Chowder.
The story's kind of like..."Bloody Mary"? Do we know who/what the killer is? What was up with the weird homunculi? I guess we'll never know...
*vanishes a la the reflections*
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I've never been scared by horror or any other kind of movies but books have succeeded on couple occasions. Metro 2033 and John Dies at the End to mention couple examples.
That's so awesome! I think it'd be brilliant if you extended it, maybe a chapter for each pony. You could maybe have twilight last, she could disregard the mirror and not send the letter and put the mirror in a hiding place so she would not notice her friends being added to the handle one by one... Oooh i love this so much!