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Kaidan


Q(^_^Q). The friendliest misanthrope you'll ever meet.

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This story is a sequel to Twilight's Dollhouse


Thirty ponies remained trapped in plastic shells as Twilight’s dolls. Lyra left them behind without a second thought. She joins Scootaloo to help rescue them, lest they be trapped for eternity as the last of Twilight’s sanity slips away. . .

Scootaloo will have to get past thoughts of revenge and her anger. Lyra will have to move past her guilt of failure. Once they have learned the skills they will need to defend themselves they will set out to find the Dollhouse and rescue their friends.

Unfortunately, time waits for no pony.

Pre-readers / Editors: Selbi, Abcron, Jaestring, TypewriterError, Breath of Plagues

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 354 )

WHOO HOO!

Here we go again!

~Skeeter The Lurker

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I love that gif. If only you knew what I had planned for Dollhouse III-V. This is gonna be good.

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Always first in, and last out, of the comment thread. Your country salutes you.

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That's the only easter egg anypony has found so far... :pinkiecrazy:

2942325
What, nobody saw the creeper? :applejackconfused:

2942350

Not yet! You're the first! GOLD MEDAL FOR OUR FRIEND HERE

2942350
Good work, you won't be blown up. :pinkiehappy:

2942382
Good work, best artist!

I can appreciate good writing but, no offense intended, this series gives me nightmares and I'm not into solely dark/tragic/sad stories. So keep writing for the people that enjoy dark stories because you can really tell a story.

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:pinkiehappy: *salutes* You got it, boss!

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Look on the bright side, I have a comedy fic planned after I wrap up Shattered Prism tomorrow. :scootangel:

*Coughs out water onto screen.*

Oh my goodness. This is a time of rejoicing. Wait, three dislikes? What is this?

I'm not going to read it....
I'm not going to read it....
God damn it, I'm going to read it.

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You can't account for taste, or human stupidity, or the universe.... one of the three I'm told is infinite. :twilightsmile:

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Awesome.

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Not going to comment.
Not going to comment.

Darn, here I am lurking in my own story thread.

Glad you enjoyed it. Mwahahaha. (At least I'm upfront and give them a taste of the 'dark' before I hook them and spring it on them five chapters in.)

2942467 Oh, by the way: I though it was really interesting how you had the Wonderbolts play a significant role in the chapter. It seems like not much is seen of them in stories like this. Either its a story about a Wonderbolts, or they're hardly mentioned.

2942467
WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?!:raritydespair:
First it was "A Puppet to Her Fame", then "Twilight's Dollhouse", and now this! You like to watch us cringe, don't you?

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I feel your pain. I really do. Puppet atings to this day.

One day I'm going to break into Kaidan's home and will force him to write alternate (happy) endings to Puppet and Dollhouse 1! :D

Oh and also, shouldn't this story have the Adventure tag? Cause you know, "Quest".

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Strangely, I actually liked PTHF, but I felt awful about it at the same time because Octavia is the best pony, but it was such a beautifully written story, and...and I feel like a horrible person for liking these things, but...but I can't help it......:fluttercry:

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I like Wonderbolts now. Wonderbolts are cool.

2942501
Yes, I fuel the nightmares of everypony.

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If said "happy" ending is that being turned into a doll is something sexual, then I'll write it for free!

I mean, there is an american TV show by Joss Whedon called Dollhouse, where women are 'programmed' to be the perfect "escort service" through mind control.

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Yes Pinkie. :twilightoops:

All the feels for Crest! :pinkiesad2:

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Wonderful, elaborate nightmares, but nightmares nevermore the less.

*After reading*
And here I thought Luna was troll VR simulating Lyra. Metal Gear Lyra! :pinkiecrazy:

Also, Scoots will lay down TEH LAW!
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Calling it now. They will find Twilights dead body and the dollhouse with all the dolls missing or destroyed.

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I love how you think, but that'd ruin my plans for world domination - Your faithful Dollmaker, Twilight Sparkle.

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Your welcome. I may do it again, next time: Guess my middle name! Mwhaahaha!

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Yep, the solution to "how do I show them how dark the story will be, without making up a fake flash forward? I know, a nightmare!" Plus, plastic ball Lyra is best Lyra. :twilightsmile:

This is turning out like The Secret life Of Rarity, in my opinion. (That's not a bad thing. i live those stories.)

The first fic sets the stage of the killer, and details her adventures
The second fic to the final fic details the repercussions of their actions on those close to them after their ultimate demise.

Yay! :yay:

2942857 World domination. Not a bad idea. Just don't mess up capturing Canterlot like Chrysalis did. She was close, but she made a very stupid mistake.

YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wait, is the epilogue to the first story still canon? Doesn't that make the outcome of this story inevitable, or will you write stories that take place after that epilogue?

Regardless, gripping and exciting start. I couldn't stop reading the first dollhouse and now I have come to realize that I am hopelessly addicted to this series and will most likely continue reading each and every one of your sequels no matter how horrifically dark they get.

I wonder what Twilight will do to her dolls as her sanity continues to slip away. I wouldn't be surprised if she started using spells that manipulate the mind in order to force them to love her, or erasing their memories of their lives before being dolls or of the ponies they left behind.

Reads story.
Sequel is uploaded the next day.
Seriously, I had no idea Twilight's Dollhouse was getting a sequel and I just happened to read it for the first time yesterday. Lucky me!:pinkiehappy:

Feed me more words, I like words.

-Mis

From her new sanctuary just outside Canterlot She

Uh-oh, Kaidan. You have problems already.

she slid out of the warm bed and into the cool night air. Lyra carefully slid out of the comfortable indent in the mattress

Slid out of twice.

IT CONTINUES TO BEGIN

Next chapter, Lyra's nightmare features Twilight's new pet dog Fluffy! Catch the ball, Fluffy!

Ahem, all craziness aside, this was a very good way to start things off. Lyra's traumatized and blaming herself, Scootaloo's angry, Luna's covering for Celestia and Celestia's working herself ragid trying to find Twilight. So much happened in Twilight's wake and who knows what'll happen next?

Anyway, have a fav, have an upvote. I'd upvote it twice but the system won't let me!

I hope this has a happy ending...if not make it bittersweet like a quarter of the dolls were turned back
Please! :fluttercry:

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the long wait is over and I've finally gone crazy after reading this and it was good.

please turn me into a doll and I happily await the next chapter.

-Hanna Lovelace

I can't believe I didn't know this story already came out! :raritycry:!


So far so good. I hope Lyra doesn't hate Twi, I know that Twi doesn't hate Lyra. But I can't wait to see what happens when they [Lyra and Scoots] finally find the Doll House. It'd both suck, yet be fitting if they ended back in there. Scoots back with Dashie and the CMC. and Lyra with Twi for eternity after squirting out Soarin's love child.


And what happens to Colgate? I mean solitary for that long period of time would be torturous on any sentient being. Hopefully Twilight summons her and Colgate becomes her next Lyra.



I hope that at least some of the Plastics become Twi's friends. Eventually. It sucks thinking of everypony hating her. She needs some Plastic Love.

Last part is dark as hell.

The only scary thing I found about this is that I can't bring myself to read it until I've finished the first Dollhouse. :rainbowlaugh:

I have to resist, I got to finished to read Twilight Dollhouse first.
Gosh, :raritycry: gosh, damn it.

Hey, did you realize that only need 11 followers to reach 666? Scare.

*cringe* Oh dear, poor Crest...:twilightoops:

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We've never had a volunteer, what do you say, Twilight?

:twilightsmile: Quick make the tea!

2948549 Looks can be deceiving even if you turn Hanna into a doll she's already immortal so efforts are wasted.

I promise that this time I will keep up with the chapters!

You know what? Contrary to most of all the other comments, I do NOT hope that this story gets a happy ending. I hope the story gets a terrible ending that leaves me scared and depressed, because it's a Dark/Sad story. The horrible ones are the best. Love this story!:pinkiecrazy:

"And if Twilight tries to stop me, I’m going to snap her neck.”

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I look forward to an Adventure from you !!
Sincerely, I look forward to wherever this goes.
PLEASE Don't kill Scootaloo! :scootangel: <--Look! You can't kill that D:
Question : You already thought of how the story goes up to 4 sequels++?

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