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Enjoyed the concept, but I think it would have been funnier to find out Luna's secrets. But I enjoyed this. 7.5/10:pinkiesmile:

Welp, saw that joke coming. Didn't stop me from laughing at it though: :pinkiehappy:

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I'm glad you enjoyed it!:pinkiehappy:

I really liked it. You get a thumbs up! :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks so much!:pinkiehappy: It was first attempt at a comedy too!

My first thought... "I bet Luna banishes Celestia to the SUN!"

Well, that was amusing. I have some issues with the formatting (mostly the extra space between paragraphs; one line should be sufficient), and spotted a couple of spelling errors, but otherwise, not too bad.

OOOH, I know Luna is the goddess of the Moon, but BURN!!! :facehoof: Seriously, Tia you don't know your sister at all. That's so sad you even make Fluttershy and the foals cry. :applecry::fluttershyouch:

Great story though.

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Thanks!!:pinkiehappy::rainbowwild:

*Laughing at that twist ending*

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:rainbowlaugh: Glad you liked it!

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Loved it!
Luna's gonna have to change her password now.

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Great! :rainbowlaugh: I'm thinking about writing a sequel!

2941486 Maybe one where Luna breaks something Celestia has? :trixieshiftright:
Anyway, this story made my day.

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Great! Hmmm. I'm not sure what to do for the sequel...

At least the password wasn't "god" or "password".

Sequel idea: Luna Teaches Celestia About the Internet (and how to use Chrome).

She tried to what!?
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAX!!!!

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I'll probably do one of those! Good ideas:twilightsmile:

"It was my name."

Celestia: Dang it
Luna: You didn't suspect?
Celestia: *Sigh* No.

Hey I was thinking I am making a sequel to this, is that alright?

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I guess so. I am making a sequel as well

I noticed a couple instances of LUS and some syntax/punctuation issues, but it didn't detract from the overall story. I laughed hysterically at Luna sleepwalking. You have inspired me to put some comedy into Luna's character in one of my stories!

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Such a twist, even M. Night felt it! :rainbowlaugh:

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Glad you enjoyed it!!!:twilightsmile:

I figured out the ending. I knew that it would be her name right after Celestia said "Her name? No, that's too obvious."

Dangit! I was guessing the Password to be 000, but I guess not everyone thinks like me.... Oh no.... did I just say that?:twilightoops:

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:rainbowlaugh: Nice avatar by the way!

Thanks! I'm sorry I can't talk right now. I need to go and change my password for... well.... Everything.... :ajbemused: ..... I'm such an idiot sometimes.....

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:rainbowlaugh: don't worry about it. Its not like everyone saw that comment

Most funny story I've ever read :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

Best ending ever. It was really funny.:derpytongue2:

The passcode for my computer is 'incorrect'

you...really suck at hacking, tia. i mean, you couldn't even guess one of the easiest passwords ever. :rainbowlaugh: then again, i would've also figured luna would use something better than just her name. (everypony should know better than to use any of the easiest of all passwords to guess: your name, your pet's name, or your birthday :P)

Wait, if she thought it was too simple for her, doesn't hat make her simple?
corpina.org/wp-content/uploads/2013/10/keanu-woah.png

... And then the ad at the bottom is for computer repairs XD

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just got to read it now, but ya it was funny but also what luna forgetting one key detil.... tia can still get to her data to with just the laptop harddrive

"It was my name."

Well that's one f##kin' plot twist

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