The whole team has fallen apart. Two captured, three missing, and two hospitalized, no has any doubt they are going to lose this war. Broken and lost the team only has tears left to shed. They need Rainbow to stand up tall and take charge but she is broken the worst. Pinkie’s at death door and preparing to knock and General Corridor is knocking at the doors of the school with an army ready to break them the rest of the way. They need all the help they can get, help that is far from coming.
Who will win and who will fall? Separate they will lose but together they will bring the world to it knees!
Sequel to Wish
Chapters (12)
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It took forever to write hope you like it
YAY
this is good
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for the YAY
YAY
more please
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Working on it! Writting all the evil and sad stuff is making me cry
So expect tears, expect them I tell you
2977357 (places kleenex box next to ice cream stash) ready and expecting
2977357 But I don't like sadness
.......Wait
.....actually I'm not minding it in this story
........Proceed
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Working on it. Expect tears and expect them soon
This chapter was a little confusing, what was with the bold letters? Was it AJ's dad? Rainbow's brother? (if she doesn't have one, then you understand my confusion cuz that's what I got from this). Whose POV was this chapter in? Just some questions I had, 'll probably think of more later.
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Oh, AJ's POV (all of it) and the bold was kinda a flashback I was fitting in. It was kinda hard to get it in the way I wanted to but the bold just separates it out from the other text. Sorry if thats confusing
i'll try to go through and work on it!
2982646 OH! That makes way more sense now. Another good idea would be to say how much time has gone on between chapters, just to avoid even more confusion later. Or deal with it now if any confusion exists now.
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Actually thats a problem I'm still working out. I have no idea how much time has passed between chapters. So yeah, will try to set it straight
2982680 HUZZAH!
2982694
wow so this Celadon creep causes a large gash wound on Applejack or did he do much worse?
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Both
Evil
he shall pay I tell you... PAY 
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(evil laugh)
This is getting intense
keep writing
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Next chapter harder then this one to write
Creeps, new people, and other stuff is what I'm planning
are there limitless number of coys or are there a certain amount
if there are more coys then mentioned is it possible there's a gun coy thst allows you acsess to all the worlds handheld wepons and on a more peaceful note a type of coy were you can summon any car in existance and and iron type I could go on but im just rambling at this point
how old exactly are the cmc's and spike (im going to guess 14 seeing it as an appropriate age for what happened) other then that great story so far
ima cry twice in one series
thats both good and awsome meaning you've attracted my full attention 
I love storys with feelz in them
so bold = celadon memorys (whos celadon?) and normal text is the chat between applejack and twilight till apple bolts to the roof were all of a sudden ranbow appears ... thats right right
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any kind you want really
thats the fun part
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around 10 (6 years younger then everyone else (almost everyone))
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I try
so discord finally shows his ugly mug face *smirks* let me at him I got a bone to pick with him
awsome story so far cant wait for the next chapter
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well might be a small wait for it. glad to know you likey
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Thanks
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Glad cha liked it
This is my least favorite chapter...
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still written well enough
with practice one can have writing humor
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Its expose to be funny
No writing humor is such a funny cruse
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just keep writing this story is good
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Yes ma'am
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Um...what does RDs dad do to her?
hard to keep track of memory vs reality but thats probably just me in all other cases great chapter
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Bold is most likely memory
not bad you got a smile from me at the at the stupidity of the generals soldiers
some practice and youll get a giggle then in best case scenario you make me have a laugh attack
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no writing humor is such a funny cruse
3075323 I happen to have really short term memory so if something happens then if the time zone of the world changes to a point in the past ill likly forget what I just read trying to remember what I read a minute before hand
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nice to know
LOL still can't wait for the next story
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You mean chapter
sorry I mean chaper
I don't live in the US so sorry for the mix up
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I get ya!! It was kinda funny tho