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The failed plans of Queen Chrysalis have lead her hive to an all time low. Flung into a desolate region by the power of Cadence and Shining Armour's spell, Queen Chrysalis falls into a brooding sadness. She she is tired of being queen and sets out on her own. Determined to leave behind all the problems of the past and get as far away from her incompetent underlings as possible. Seeing their queen so down her remaining drones and workers try their best to cheer her up. But thinking isn't their strong point, so their efforts lead to a number interesting failures.

(This is planned to be a short story for the "Love me, love my hive." event on Equestria daily.)

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Comments ( 12 )

Not bad at all. That was very well written! Giving/receiving love is kind of like an ever-growing stack of, say, cards. The exchange between two builds up that stack, but changelings only take. So, in learning to give and receive, I don't see why changelings couldn't self-support themselves.

Likewise, I like good endings too! :twilightsmile:

Thanks for the feed back, means a lot to me :pinkiehappy:

2952617 This wasn't exactly funny. It was ridiculous at time sure but... the way the story went on... It was beautiful.

5564545 So glad you enjoyed it, I was still finding my feet when I wrote it (still am to be honest :twilightsmile: ) Thanks for your feedback

5564618 Well if you would like any help or just want to talk my skype is dionysiosbbbb and I am pm ready at all times.

5564744 Don't have skype (well more accurately a camera :twilightsmile: ) but it's good to know the offer is there. Thanks again :pinkiehappy:

5565000 Skype can always work as just a chat or simply with calls.

5565077 Ah good to know, I'll look into it :pinkiehappy:

That was adorable and really heartwarming. The mental image of Chryssie sleeping while hugging the drone is melt - level cuteness.

Glad to see someone else that loves happy endings.

Cya
Raziel-chan

6567991 So glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile: Thanks for taking the time to leave feed back it means a lot to me!

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