after one thousand years, two worlds come back the Vamponies vs. Wereponys come to finish where they left off.
now twilight and friends are in the middle of it, some separated from each other and trap in there world, they find to end this with new and old friends before equestria is destroy and lives are lost.
(warning!!) has a little of Gore and some bad language
this take after season 3 and some of the chapters may have 2 sides of talking at same time with the vampponys and wereponys
Chapters (4)
Hello,
Although I will admit that this is far from the best story I've read I am interested in where this is going.
I didn't spot anything wrong with your grammar or spelling but I can think of two improvements that could be made:
Firstly, please use capital letters in the title, description and chapter titles, it will make your story look far more appealing immediately.
And secondly, I would suggest maybe slowing the story down and describing more like what the characters look like, what the castles look like and where they are.
I hope this helps, and do keep up the good work
So glad you like it happy people like it is my first made up story
Oh some one fix grammar or spelling one the 2 before it was approved because they where bad grammar and now I have to have some fix my other chapters when I'm done with them.
For the describing more what the characters look like I do that in my 3 or 4 chapter will see how this work out and I try slowing the story down.
Go Team vampire! (Not twilight vampires though)
2991254 The first story is always the hardest. Especially if your bad at spelling and grammar. I am terrible at it too
But this is off to a better start than my first story
same here I have first story but is Crossover with pokemon
as well my spelling and grammar I'm still terrible is because of my Autism no matter how I try my best and get little better as time goes on in my whole life I still will have trouble spelling and grammar
you get better with you story's as time goes on
2993698 Same with me. I was terrible with grammar with my first story before I deleted it. I got better with the grammar ever since.
Sooooooooooooo more
5929824 well sorry im having some help me Proofread and fix my fist 4 chapters make and more later. it because I have Autism and I try my best and I get little better but still cant make it to that level that people can read and understand my story's. I see thing in a different way when I do my story's try to understand that
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That's okay. I'm sure lots of people have the same problems as you. If you want this story to continue, just do your best. If you don't want the story to continue, then just stop. Not every story you have is going to be perfect.
One more thing, I agree on the part you said. "You get better with your story as time goes on"
Is there a chance this group will come out of Hiatus?