I've thought of other worlds my entire life, but I never thought I would actually travel to one. When I went to Equestria, I expected a peaceful existence in the new world. But when an evil force rises, I must rise up to fight for Equestria and my newly found friends. As my first fanfic I hope you enjoy it.
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Link?
Anyways, this definitely looks worth a read.
Link mah boii, this peace is what true warriors strive for!
so...you end by jumping off a cliff?
evil way of using a cliffhanger my good sir
Oh.. my.. - Fluttershy
THIS WAS PERFECTION.
240181 Well thanks! I really appreciate comments like this. I'm glad I did good for my first fanfic.
239952 Perhaps, but I left it open ended because I was thinking of doing a sequel. I'll wait and see how this is received, then I'll make my decision.
Nyehh, I got bored halfway through...
Too much like Zelda... IT'S DANGOUROUS TO GO ALONE! HERE! TAKE THIS! With no character or plot developement at all... Besides... The earth revolves around the sun and the moon revolves around the earth... Didn't you know that?
241085 Be that as it may, I think I did good for my first project. I do welcome your critique nonetheless.
twas good i was sadened you didnt come up with origional lines but it was awsome nonetheless well dash got to experiance near death experiances
lol if you make a sequel i hope its as good as this one but you dont have to do world destroying type situations k.
maby <.<>.> maby a little romance or shipping between the pony's w the help of the human
anyway have a
Pretty good AND this is your first one. I think you have a future here son!
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Really now with the shield and the sword?
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269972 Yeah so? It's a fan fiction. I could have thrown in Dragon Ball Z. I just thought the sword and shield would make good weapons.
269982 did I say i didn't like it?
I LOVED IT
269983 Clever girl... I hope your looking forward to the sequel I'm planning.
269992 what the fuck?
DID YOU JUST CALL ME GIRL NIGGA
243312 Well I like the suspense of near cataclysmic events. Also I'm not shipping anytime soon.
269994 Jurrassic Park reference. Remember when that guy got ambushed by the raptors?
270002 oh.