• Member Since 24th Jul, 2013
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Magic Mage

I make DA bestis SHEIT in da world nigga


They live 10,000 years in the future in a post-apocalyptic world. After many years of Twilight being a princess many foes have come and gone but one villain made robots from monsters and mixed them with forbidden magic. He tried to rule Equestira, soon he was able to make the monsters multiply (with magic) even after he was defeated. Twilight made a spell to destroy them all at once but it failed and disrupted the natural order of the universe or at least their whole world. So the world is kinda like a game, monster and anypony (even if not a robot) can level up. Twilight knew her friends needed to stay alive for a long time to help ponies everywhere so she turned them all in to part robot and they could all use magic in different ways. But for some reason it turned her into a robot too, Celestia is no where to be found and Luna is the master of the world right now. Right now they are in Ponyville but it's also Canterlot as well, it is the biggest safe zone in all of equestia and they need to protact it with there lives.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 30 )

Bravo bro, I can't believe it came out so well. I can't wait to see what happens next.

This was amazing and I can't wait until the nexts chapter.

I'm thinking it's either pinkie pie or Luna.

You all are in for treat. Once I finish editing of course. :P


Thanks, sorry about the first chapter. I know it's short but the chapters get longer.

The first chapter was a little short but I still think it was funny and I know if I read on I will understand it more.

This was the best chapter so far, I love the hooded pony thing. I can't to see what happens. :) /)

Don't rush yourself but I really hope to see it soon.


Yeah sorry about that, I may redo the first chapter.

Yay a new chapter!!! It was kinda short but I still liked it. I can't wait for more.

Short but still good. I can't wait to see what happens next.

HA, dr, jacks care center for robots, cyborgs and puppies XD. Keep up the awesome story!:pinkiehappy::coolphoto:


Yeah sorry, this is the first story I have ever wrote so this is mostly to see if I could write something that at least one person would like, and so far it's going well. Thanks for reading.


Thanks for reading :).


My friend 8loodyrain made that Oc's and he gave me the idea to make him a doctor.

Lol, I new it would be funny. Nice chapter bro /).

I can't wait for the next chapter.

This is the worst story I've ever read...I like it

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