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The Changelings send ambassadors to the Griffin Kingdom with a request for an alliance and a royal marriage with a Griffin princess, and the King agrees and gives them his daughter, Princess Gilda. Gilda is anything but impressed-at first.
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That was... quick.
2969624 There is more to come of course.
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Maybe I should have said "your pacing was way fast". This chapter could easily have been twice as long.
Not... sure, but I'll stick around to see where this is going. Seems to be moving along extremely fast. Still, Princess Gilda, given away to a Changeling. I like the premise enough to see where it's going.
2970285 I get good ideas but then hurry them.
That gryphon transformation image... Celestial damn it, I have not seen that in ages!
It's a pretty unique mashup of characters, so far. I'm not quite getting the sense that there's anything either one would have in common with the other, though. Might make their interactions kind of stiff and blah, going forward.
I do agree, it's a pairing I did not think of, and the idea of it sounds fun :)
I would like to see where this is going, and I think you could add alittlgh more detail and spacing other then that it's good
Interesting chapter. I must say never would've expected this kind of pairing but it's pretty cool. Can't wait to see what happens next.
right. This feels....really rushed. Like, I can't get into anything. The characters don't feel like themselves at all either. So. yeah. Thumbs down. Sorry. Good luck in the future.
5665836 Ok, hey, at least you commented. Not all my fics are going to be really good for everyone who reads them, at least I'm trying to write again.
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True, true. I didn't want to leave a downvote without letting you know why.
The pace is just far too fast and the characters feel very out of character (too nice, really)
and then the plothole of why the Griffons would accept an alliance like that when Equestria could and most likely does have spies of their own who could easily and quickly hear about it.
BUT. The idea is neat. I do like that and the pairing.
5668445 I get good ideas and good pairings, but can't always follow through with them.
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I don't think I've seen it before myself; but it's certainly distracting in how clearly not Gilda or otherwise related to the story description it is.
6782460 You don't seem to have anything nice to say about my fics.Either you are asking if they are dead, or saying unkind things about them.