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Bubble Berry asks Rainbow Blitz for advice on how to be manlier. Also, Dusk Shine's nemesis plots his revenge, and a mysterious creature attacks Ponyville.
This is set in the same universe as "On a Cross and Arrow." Gender swapped ponies, for the uninitiated. Because this story really wouldn't work if Bubble Berry was Pinkie Pie.
I think that even if the genderswapped ponies have the same personality, the fact that society treats people differently based on gender means that their stories might be slightly different. This is a story which is only really possible in the Cross and Arrow Universe.
Spoiler: I haven't actually read "On a Cross and Arrow". I've been meaning to. No time.
My submission for the February Write Off.
Great story! It has a good episode-like feel to it, with Berry learning an important lesson about being himself. Well done!
That was really good, I enjoyed it a lot! I did notice a few small errors though:
1. At the start, Butterscotch is referred to as an earth pony instead of a pegasus.
2. Near the end, there is a reference to Celestia instead of Solaris.
3. Angel Bunny is described with male pronouns a couple of times.
Other than that, though, this really was a terrific story.
Loved this story! Well, I love all the colt!6 stories but this one was awesome!
Please say you're gonna do a sequel.
Aw that was great
I'd love to see more of this.
This was really good! Why doesn't this have more views?
You nailed the characterisation and wrapped it up in a sweet story. Shame we never saw Presto confronting Dusk but hey ho. Have a like and a fav.
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Presto has escaped for now. Thier confrontation will have to wait.
Urge to write a homoerotic genderswapped version of Magic Duel rising.
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My gosh, that was awesome~!
It really felt like an actual episode and the characters were spot on! Presto was very amusing with his wondering thoughts and I enjoyed how everything tied together in the end so nothing happened without a reason. The character interactions were great and I have no complaints on the way the story was written. Amazing job! 
It's about time we had a good ole rule 63 story thats focused on Dusk shines world and not Twilights
great job and I hope to see more 
Hey there! I did a fanfic reading with a full cast of your story! The script is a little slightly altered to fit today's times. I hope you are okay with that.