Everypony used to know the name Vinyl Scratch, but she's been forgotten. Everypony knows the name Octavia Philharmonica, and it will be known long after she dies. Vinyl Scratch is a DJ by the alias DJ-PoN3. Octavia is a world-class cellist. What do they have in common? I have no idea. Why do they meet? Not a clue. Why don't we find out?
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Way short
but I seem to like
it work on it 'Faved!'
2924831 Thank you!
And don't worry, more will come (hopefully) soon!
I REALLY thinkyou should continue this
2926080 Did you not see it? The little word 'Incomplete'? Don't you worry, it will update!
1am is a good update time
2929003 Right?
2930956 I mean come on who isnt up then watching Shitstorm of Scariness
2931698 It might not be ready at one, but, I should have minimum 1000 words by 10 am tomorrow.
Equestria
2931820 Thanks :pinkyhappy: I had forgotten to fix that. Kudos to you.
2933136 More on the wubs tomorrow (probably).
HOORAY and ive had that moment where im reading fanfics and then i had a revalation.......i hadnt eaten in 2 days
2937575 Never really had much appetite this time of year anyways.
2939425 THANK YOU SO MUCH!
<That's tears of joy< This is the response I wanted. And yes, I think I will update every two days! Thank you, again.
THE PINK MENACE
Its ok.....shit happens.......people i know fuck up all the time
Okay. Now, a little diclaimer: anything I say is my personal opinion and isn't meant to offend your skills as a writer. It should be taken merely within my rather poor writing expertise.
I've read your story, and I can't say that I, personally, am satisfied with it. Please don't get me wrong: I love OctaScratch, and I don't mind POV shifts and the like. I also don't mind short chapters. What I do mind, however, is that I am yet to find a truly original idea. Throughout the fic, I've felt as if I were reading an abriged version of Allegrezza, mixed up with some of the OctaScratches I've read. It is entertaining, and cute, and you aren't rushing the pacing most of the time, and you are doing the time skips correctly. Still, I have been reading with a view to originality, which is one of the terrible traits of mine. I know that the story's still young, and it has potential, and this is why I faved it (and even put a like, because, well, I did like it; I also have a policy of liking things that I fave), but I beg you to consider to fresh up your writing a bit. Pre-reading usually helps: not editing, but just sending your fic to readers and maybe other writers who work in the same genre to give you advice on plot points and the way you present your chapters.
Again, let me repeat that: it doesn't mean that it's bad. Just, let me give you a comparison: John Grisham and David Baldacci. I love reading Grisham because he is original in what he writes. It captures your attention at once, grabs it by originality. Baldacci's work, however, is good, but seems to me bland and very standard. It's not bad, just... not my cup of tea.
~Josh
2939425
It's also more rewarding, though.
Hey guys! Guess what?!?!?! I'm starting this story again (hopefully). It will be a little different as my life is VERY as in <i><b>VERY</i></b> different so that will probably affect my story... I might restart it so that my writing style doesn't seem to abruptly change. I'm sorry to those folk that waited soooooooo long for an update, but, school and girlfriend and stress and stuff have made my ponies a little difficult to focus on. Plus I lost all of the data for the next chapter a while a go. If you want info I'll post a blog but it's not very important.
3429268 I really appreciate your viewing and constructive critique. It's been a while since I updated, and I wasn't particularly satisfied either. Who'd you suggest for pre-reading?
3432280
Well, I could definitely pre-read the fic, if you want me to. And for editing, I could suggest Syvvak (ask him in a PM, and tell him I recommended his wonderful services. He has a lot on his plate, but I guess he can make time for your fic.) I've had many editors, but he is simply the best of the best.
3433069 Well on the pre-read, I'm now working on a new chapter, don't worry, it'll be a while (aka like a week). I'll ask, and I'll be sure to mention you in the request.
3433069
And I don't have a lot on my plate, I just can't ever get around to it. I am very easily distracted. Especially by music.
Awww, I blush.
Missed this one. Nix the question mark.
I'm doing my edit posts (courtesy of Syvvak) and I saw the beginning... If you get the reference, I must applaud you.
This makes it sound as if the curtains are shining on Octavia. Should read like: The curtains were open and the sun was shining down on one ash grey, charcoal maned mare.
What the hay happened last night?
Greypon3
pink menace=Pinkie Pie
white menace=Vinyl Scratch
I like the Deadmau5 reference. Now, if everypony would get DJ Pon3 pronounced right.